Holy shit, I wish you'd continued this is really fantastic!

Im gonna sound odd here but i like wat uve done so far. I think its got lots of directions it can go in and cant wait to see them. Secondly its really sad but seems to kinda fit with them, keep going please !

okay it made me sad and 't wait for the next soon

AOK, young person. Our attention is surely captured with your tragic premise. Our sadness for Will is increased even more. Angst and hurt now established with connected and flowing diction narative. Fine writing skills immerge. Congratulations! With all this going for you, how could you resist a rapid update to this so different but smooth entre?

Oooh, interesting premise! Great start!

This really good! Love your writing and hope to read more here soon, plese keep up the good work! I have no idea why there are so few TGW stories out there, glad you are about to change that! ;)

This is so sad :(:(:( wakeee up aliciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa