Reviews for When everything is wrong, you are right
DemonSessama chapter 20 . 4/8
Well it's about time woman.
This chapter is on to the creepy part, this bit always creeps me out but it was an extremely good chapter and it shows you haven't lost you magic touch. The part were Garrus commented on Shepard's weight was hilarious and Reapers a 'good sign'. The world will end before that happens this chapter was fantastic. Update soon
M-Angel 05 chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Love the story. Update asap!
DemonSessama chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
Great chapter and it is about time you updated but WHY? Why do they have to kill so many good people I swear I am going to hit something if they kill another person
milly-finalfantasy chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
Lovely chapter :)
You even had me tearing up about Legion again...not done that for awhile :P great writing skills
So much action this chapter hated fighting that reaper I always got so worked up with nerves so could only imagin what it felt like for Zo :)
Cant wait for the next update :)
Guest chapter 18 . 10/9/2013
Please update sooooon
Guest chapter 18 . 9/22/2013
Please update soooon
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Somebody hates kaidin
spaceconveyor chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Oh my god, you are so cruel. ;-/ lol I can't wait for the next chapter!
Mordinette chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
LOL, I loved Shepard calling Javik's plasma rifle ray gun and Javik getting miffed about it. :D

And shooting Kaidan in the knee was a good move! :)
Mordinette chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
Thank you for making Shepard be so upset about Mordin sacrificing himself and for making her try to stop him and save him! You wrote the scene very touchingly.
milly-finalfantasy chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
Great chapter :) sorry you had a bit of writers block...grab that little muse back :P
One of my favourite bits is when your on Rannoch and a geth drops down behind Shepard, Garrus punches it on the back of the head as he runs by protecting Shepard, then Tali takes it out :)
I neva realised just how lucky Zo is, but the last 2 chapter really show that she is one lucky son of a bitch :P
Loved Garrus and Zo in the med bay its lovely to see what happens after and between missions :)

Cant wait for the next update :)
DemonSessama chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
WHAT IS THAT CRAZY CYBERNETIC HALF-HUMAN HALF-TURIAN BIOTIC COMMANDER OF A WOMAN THINKING?
Fighting a REAPER on the flaming GROUND. I love this chapter and I'm glad you managed to work past the writers block and thank you Thane for helping Shepard
barbex chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
Way to go Shepard, why don't you give Garrus a heart attack while you're at it?
This is all so very interesting, her transformation, how weak she is. I like that, that she isn't somehow superhuman and that Anderson even wants Joker to look after her, that people, not only Garrus-the-worrywart worry about her.
Kasena chapter 18 . 5/12/2013
1) OMG UPDATE! I WAS SOOO WAITING FOR THIS! SO GOOD! AND SHEPARD IS FINDING OUT ABOUT HER PREGNANCY!
2) Now that the fangirling is out of the way, well done. A few grammar/spelling errors, but the story is still enjoyable.
3) We all know Shepard's going to survive this. Garrus should've figured out by now that Shepard always the impossible. ::)
Mordinette chapter 7 . 5/6/2013
Great chapter! When Shepard offered to help Victus ease tension I thought she meant the other kind... LOL

But this was fun, too! :D
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