Reviews for When everything is wrong, you are right
Guest chapter 21 . 7/6
That's soo wrong keeping a secret like that from shep, I mean what if she went into labor in the middle of battle. I think u have been watching " I didn't know I was pregnant " haven't u?... Because that is what u r making it out to be. I like that show anyway they should tell her at least so she knows why she's getting sick all the time
nazaninhemmatpour89 chapter 21 . 1/27
Can't wait for next chapter
dannybates chapter 21 . 11/18/2014
Thank you so much for updating this fiction, I always enjoy reading it. I'll be waiting for more!
DemonSessama chapter 21 . 11/18/2014
AH, good chapter, I love how Shepard and the others are feeling rushed off their feet and how protective Garrus is of Zo it is so sweet, (and yes the Thanix Cannon is his second love). I also like how Chakwas and Sidonis are protecting Shepard, even probably going to get beaten to High Heaven themselves when the parents find out, and EDI and Joker, sneaky little eavesdroppers (I just hope Joker can keep a secret).

Keep writing
NoisulIvone chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
You back!
Lady Velvet C. Peterson chapter 21 . 11/16/2014
Oh damn I know at least Edi can be trusted but not Joker.
KrystylSky chapter 20 . 9/11/2014
Post more please
Guest chapter 20 . 8/8/2014
I love this story please update soon.
DemonSessama chapter 20 . 4/8/2014
Well it's about time woman.
This chapter is on to the creepy part, this bit always creeps me out but it was an extremely good chapter and it shows you haven't lost you magic touch. The part were Garrus commented on Shepard's weight was hilarious and Reapers a 'good sign'. The world will end before that happens this chapter was fantastic. Update soon
M-Angel 05 chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Love the story. Update asap!
DemonSessama chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
Great chapter and it is about time you updated but WHY? Why do they have to kill so many good people I swear I am going to hit something if they kill another person
milly-finalfantasy chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
Lovely chapter :)
You even had me tearing up about Legion again...not done that for awhile :P great writing skills
So much action this chapter hated fighting that reaper I always got so worked up with nerves so could only imagin what it felt like for Zo :)
Cant wait for the next update :)
Guest chapter 18 . 10/9/2013
Please update sooooon
Guest chapter 18 . 9/22/2013
Please update soooon
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Somebody hates kaidin
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