|Reviews for The Emancipation of Yuki Nagato|
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2014
Perhaps a little too much variation, not sure.
Hope you can see your way to continuing or expanding upon this theme as these 2 chapters are a little hard to digest - seems like the story wants to shoot off in random directions & needs more to it in order to further the overall comprehension.
(This is probably the least positive Rate&Review Ive written for any of the 40-50 Yuki Nagato/Full Metal Panic/Ah My Goddess stories Ive read on here -sorry about that...)
| 1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
sex tapes...really haruhi? lol looking forward to your next chapter xD
| The Hidden Lostar chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
Interesting enough - there can never be enough Yuki representation. The writing style subtly resembles a manga, which isn't bad either. I have a bit of advice though. When there is a conversation that involves more than two people, it's best to make frequent notes as to who said what. Since stories are text-based, we cannot rely on quotation bubbles to guide us, so a little more emphasis of that will make the whole experience slightly better.
Anywho, hope to see more from ya'z!
| Mijumaruwott chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
Really enjoy it so far. Hope you'll continue.