Reviews for Life on Ashes
theHuntgoeson chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
This story is simply FANTASTIC! It's one of the best LOM/A2A combined fics I've read, and it makes me wish so much that Gene, Sam and Alex had been allowed to work together in the canon series. Your dialogue for them is so brilliant, are you sure you aren't one of M7A's scriptwriters under an assumed name? Your solution to the mystery is amazing, I'm totally hooked on the idea of Morgan being Gene's murderer, it would explain so much. I was crying throughout the last chapter, realising that Alex would be going home, but your ending is great - we know that Alex will return to Gene just as he needs her most, after Sam's disappearance. Love it love it love it!
saffarinda chapter 15 . 3/8/2013
... you just killed me, really :/ now im going to imagine she gets killed and everyones happy :3 ...except the ppl in 2008 but who cares? :P
JoinTheHunt1981 chapter 15 . 8/28/2012
Aww, what a great ending! I know you have split Gene and Alex up for now, but we all know that a bullet is going to come along and change that very soon :)
I have really enjoyed this story. It's been so cleverly thought out and well written and it has had me gripped from the start. Well done! :D
wombledon chapter 15 . 8/27/2012
Well, it's a brave step to leave them separated at the end but it works. Poor ol' Gene though; Alex gets back to her life and he... doesn't. He's so brash and loud and yet strangely vulnerable in this fic that I wish he wasn't so lonely. Ah well, here's hoping they get the future they deserve eventually. Well done, Fen.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/27/2012
I'm so sad they weren't together at the end, but it was beautifully written & there is hope !
Siggy chapter 15 . 8/27/2012
A very thoughtful and realistic ending to this story - always sad when Gene and Alex don't end up together but in this instance its quite fitting and your ending points the way to a glimmer of hope.

A great story and its been great to see LOM Gene and Alex together.
Jazzola chapter 15 . 8/26/2012
I thought that was a great ending. Fabulous writing, and the interactions between Gene and Sam were brilliant. And the twist of Morgan being the killer...

Fantastic writing.

oceancounty chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
Simply brilliant! What an amazing imagination you have to put this spin on the story:) I loved the Taylor & Burton line. Thanks for writing this fabulous story!
theoofoof chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
Interesting way to end. Like you say - hope for the future. Could a sequel possibly make an appearance?
GeneHuntress chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
Loved it, Fen - and the fact that you left a little chink of light at the end was just a bonus. xx
ashesfan0810 chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
squeal please but could molly go back with alex to since she knows what gene's world is
sash queen of the jungle chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
Yeah I live in hope for galex. :). Thanks for writing
Siggy chapter 14 . 8/19/2012
Another fantastic chapter and the pace really seems to have hotted up. Love the cliffhanger although I have a sneaky suspicion its not quite as obvious as the final line seems to suggest. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
sash queen of the jungle chapter 14 . 8/17/2012
So he does know where he's come from? Could Alex be pregnant? Can't wait for more
sash queen of the jungle chapter 10 . 8/17/2012
Together...galex. I'm happy
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