Reviews for music of the cores
Topaz18 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I love the back-story you created for Space, it's really cute. I always imagine Space as a child for some reason. Also, I like the fact that every time he mentions another sphere, he always calls them a brother or a friend. There are a few improvements that you need to make on this story though. It was really good, but I had to auto correct the punctuation and capitalization in my head. This story could be a lot better if you go through and capitalize the sentences. I don't mean to be mean, this story is really great other than the punctuation errors.