|Reviews for Crests of Origin|
| KumoFuzei chapter 1 . 22h ago
"play it's melody" its* it's always stands for it is. So anytime you type it say the sentence and replace it's with it is to see if it makes sense.
"proceeding to rub at her soaked fur" tenses, proceeded*
I enjoyed the character interactions and the plot has me hooked already. A strong first chapter and my only issue is the descriptions. They feel stilted and stale. Having them detracts from the story because they just feel like lists. Strong start and I'll make sure to be reading on when I get time!
| Ken Ichijouji02 chapter 12 . 3/11
This is so amazing so far. Most of it, I feel like I'm watching the actual series and the description is really good. I do hope Koichi's not really dead though as that would be tragic. I'm glad you have J.P. and Zoe married as that couple is so underappreciated by the fans when they're the ones who understand each other emotionally. I haven't picked up on the hints for other couples so far but nice to see one of my favourites.
Your characterisation is pretty good as well, except with Davis I feel. I don't think even if he was grounded, if he knew his friends were in trouble, he'd go against his parents and sister to help them. He went against Tai to help Ken after all. So I feel that part is a bit OOC as Davis isn't one to accept defeat so easily even with being grounded. We've seen how he gets when his dear friends are in trouble after all.
The Frontier characters have good characterisation and Tommy is adorable. He's my favourite in Frontier so give him some shining moments. As for crests for Davis, Yolei and Cody. I see Davis with Miracles, Yolei with Compassion and Cody with Honour. Hope you check out my fanfic too.
| Fallen-Angels01 chapter 1 . 3/1
This is interesting. I like 02 x 04 crossovers, they're usually not done good but I'm enjoying this so far. Did T.K. find a D-Tector? Anyway, I'll keep reading to find out.
| The Light's Refrain chapter 12 . 2/20
Well that was...unexpected XD. At least TK's got his crest back, but how did it end up inside of Koromon? So that leaves Yolei and Davis. Davis must be Miracles, but what would Yolei be? Love or Sincerity? I'm leaning toward the latter.
Interesting seeing all the theories about the worlds floating about. I'm sticking to my corruption theory personally.
| NatNicole chapter 12 . 2/18
I hope the Warriors get to meet the DigiDestineds at some point soon, that'd be really interesting. And is Koichi gonna be seen at some point or is he really gone forever?
| ariaT27 chapter 12 . 2/17
When you started talking about dimensions and stuff...I was all, A Wrinkle in Time anyone? I was half expecting you to mention tesseracts. My head is still spinning from all of these theories. :P
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 12 . 2/16
Wow, now it's getting pretty twisted. Warriors need to get there pronto!
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 12 . 2/16
| superstar22 chapter 12 . 2/16
I loved this chapter! Tho there wasn't really that much action, I still liked it none the less, great job my friend :)
| The Light's Refrain chapter 10 . 1/12
LOL, Davis has finally met his match in the Koromon :). Him and Izzy both actually, since they have to track it down now. It had a Hope symbol on its egg, so maybe it'll digivolve into something other than Agumon?
So Koji's looking into the new DDs. I wonder what part they'll have to play in this.
Looking for a crest in all that sand? Hope is what'll they need alright.
| The Light's Refrain chapter 9 . 1/12
Haha, Davis gets stuck babysitting. This should be fun...assuming there's a house left afterward. It was funny when the egg was floating around after TK too.
So they have to find all the crests again. That's going to take awhile...time they may not have. Good to see more of the LWs too.
| The Light's Refrain chapter 8 . 1/12
Poor Davis, he's so clueless (though this time it's not this fault).
Interesting history lesson. I still wonder who or what the light is. I guess that's something to be answered later. I don't think the DDs fully understand what the Spirits do, however :P.
And Stingmon digivolved! JewelBeetlemon, cool. Good to see Ken finally getting his crest too: he's deserved it for a while.
| The Light's Refrain chapter 7 . 1/12
And the DDs and LWs finally meet! And at a soccer match, of all places XD. But poor Koji: seeing Ken seems to have given him a bad sense of deja vu. Too bad they don't have time to chat, though the LWs reaction to them warping through the computer was pretty funny.
The battle's barely started, and already Kari's possessed by that strange light from before. The light...Bokomon, maybe?
| The Light's Refrain chapter 6 . 1/12
Of course the Digital World's time flow has shifted again: it's never been that stable. Makes dealing with all the fighting that much harder though. So Patamon can go Ultimate, even without the Crest. Huh...
As much as I love Season 2, the DDs there are definitely the weakest of the seasons: they depend of DNA Digivolution just to go to Ultimate, which is cool but cuts their fighting numbers by half, and it's only Ken and Davis's combined Digimon that ever reaches Mega. So these guys really need a boost.
Aww, it's so funny and cute seeing the LW gang together again. Interesting seeing how their lives have gone: so Koji's a police/FBI guy now? Cool. I wonder what happened to Koichi though. It sounds like he didn't make it: did he not survive the final battle, or was it something that happened after the crazyness in the Digital World? Guess we'll see.
| The Light's Refrain chapter 5 . 1/12
The LWs finally make an appearance! It's odd seeing them as adults XD. And JP and Zoe have a kid! Cute little guy too. Should be fun seeing what role they'll have to play: they don't have the Spirits anymore, but perhaps they'll fight another way to fight?
Also, LOL to Davis being bored :P.