|Reviews for Zero Hour: Defense of Shanxi|
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
Honestly I can't think of a singly criticism (apart from lack of chapters!) which is proof to me that this story deserves to be on my favourites list.
Looking forward to lots more,
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
Heh, I like how you put some of the units quotes in. I just finished playing some SCII I can still remember what they sound like. Good times...
| OSR fanatic chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
| HellsMaji chapter 3 . 6/2/2013
Hmm. There seems to be a distinct lack of more chapters. Which is pretty disappointing. Lol, I hope you decide to continue with this soon.
| Pwnbot chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Problem with uniting the universes ME games take place 2180's starcraft games start at 2499
| Some Guy chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
Good job, but when will you make chapter 4?
| Hydroplatypus chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Looks interesting. I'll give a more through review once I get through the remainder of the story.
| starwars05 chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
Cool take can't wait to read more
| MEleeSmasher chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Why u not continuing?!
| scottusa1 chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
I wish this story could continue. It had so much potential. :(
| Tormound chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
The Protoss would utterly wipe the floor against any race that relies on mass effect technology. The shields that the Turians, Asaris, Salarians, etc are actually KINETIC barriers while Protoss uses plasma shielding. They deflect that super sped up shots fired from a gun. They don't stop energy weapons so they are utterly defenseless against energy based weapons that Protoss uses. So ground and and space engagement would be an easy win for the Protoss, with a charging zealot being a lot scarier than a charging krogan. I do wonder how the citadel species will react to the Protoss, Terrans, and Zerg. 2 of them heavily rely on A.I. tech which is illegal in citadel space. Protoss and Asari interaction would be interesting. Blue skinned, very long lived, somewhat religiously based government along with similar warriors; justicars and zealots.
| Celestia's Paladin chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Judging by what I have seen so far this will not be a curbstomp for either side, and the Citadel is in for one hell of a surprise. So far this is damn good.
Ok so we have seen... Shepard's dad, Joker's dad...
| DaLintyMan chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
What is the turian reaction to light vehicular infantry? Maybe you should do a chapter on that.
| Warmach1ne32 chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Dude, are you still breathing or have you given up on the story. If your dead may you rest in peace. If you gave up on the story you need to inform every reader that you do give up on the story in an author's notes.
| eldarhunter chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
OK first update soon i love this second when the protoss show up this will become a one-sided kill-fest they move too fast for normal people (turians) to see are huge with shields 10 times better and energy weapons... yeah turians are FUCKED and three have the zerg take info from the mind of a turian and then invade their homeworld show them the power of the swarm... GAMEOVER.