|Reviews for Zero Hour: Defense of Shanxi|
| Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 1/10
If you don't mind, I would like to help you edit your chapters. Honestly, they don't really need much work, just a few tweaks concerning diction and tense. Please p.m. me and I'll send you my comtact info.
| Tsamoka chapter 3 . 9/30/2015
Looks like the Turians got trigger-happy and started a war they won't like. Certainly puts a damper on any chance of the Alliance joining the Citadel. Can't wait to see the rest. :)
| Shisha-no-Chiko chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
Protoss lifespan is several thousand years. Zerathul alone is almost 2000 years in the games.
I really like the story, otherwise.
| Zelara chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Why would the Terran/Protoss ever even bother with Mass Effect Tech? The derivative technologies we see in game are so hilariously behind the stuff that is available in the Koprulu Sector that there is a,most nothing that would benefit them. Especially Medi-gel, I mean really, the battlefield medicine in SC is to shoot green healing lasers that work forever from 10 feet away, and repair both flesh and possibly armor and you have limited amounts of burn salve as being a viable alternative?
| themarineguy chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
this story is overall very great and i really wanna see the turians' reaction to the alliances technology and tactics, after all, the humans were supposed to be primitive and weak in comparison to the turians, but instead they face this!
| tylermech66 chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
why u abandon dis?! It so gut!
Seriously, why did you abandon this? It seemed to be going so good...
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
Honestly I can't think of a singly criticism (apart from lack of chapters!) which is proof to me that this story deserves to be on my favourites list.
Looking forward to lots more,
| CookieMonsta1233 chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
Heh, I like how you put some of the units quotes in. I just finished playing some SCII I can still remember what they sound like. Good times...
| OSR fanatic chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
Great Story! :) Update Soon! :)
| HellsMaji chapter 3 . 6/2/2013
Hmm. There seems to be a distinct lack of more chapters. Which is pretty disappointing. Lol, I hope you decide to continue with this soon.
| Pwnbot chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Problem with uniting the universes ME games take place 2180's starcraft games start at 2499
| Some Guy chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
Good job, but when will you make chapter 4?
| Hydroplatypus chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Looks interesting. I'll give a more through review once I get through the remainder of the story.
| starwars05 chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
Cool take can't wait to read more
| MEleeSmasher chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Why u not continuing?!