Wtf the fuck was that? This is dumb as fuck.

WOW, this is fucking horrible.

WOW your narration of this story is mother fucking horrible!
I couldn't even finish the chapter...its that bad

That was funny. You definitely illustrate all the ridiculousness that we choose to ignore in order to love these characters. But we still love them. And I'm a feminist, too. ;-D

Too funny. Enjoyed it!

I want to dip you in bronze and put you on a shelf for writing this: "Just so the author doesn't have to flesh out any more characters, she's going to give our couple a bubble to live in."

I am absolutely dying. This is the greatest thing ive ever read you are absolutely brilliant and hilarious. Hahahahahahaha. Thank you so so much. Hysterical!

"Mmm," she says with dreamy eyes, snuggling against him, "you're like sleeping on the coldest cement." THIS HAHAHAHA

AND THIS: his voice sounds like a whining toddler or a Greek boy-god, depending on which team the reader's on.

LMAO OMFG. AND BASICALLY THE WHOLE LAST FEW PARAGRAPHS HAVE ME CACKLING. OMFG YOU ARE BRILLIANT.

I loved it and loved the style you wrote it in.
Very different mostly the reason I enjoyed it so much
:)

I LOVE THIS. Seriously, it's so good lol. They're such dorks and it's so funny but they're still adorable! LMAO

LMAO OMG hahahaha this is so funny. Man, i've really needed this today. Thank god i decided to read it now.

Oh, my god. Hahaha. You are amazing. Seriously. It's only the first chapter and i already know i'm going to be cackling like a hyena on crack. (yes, i tweeted that too)

ANYWAY; i couldn't stop giggling throughout this. I can't wait to keep reading!

I've been in such a depressive mood ALL DAY because my friend went back home to Melbourne (all my friends up here SUCK ASS and never make the effort to see me) and i've been so tired so i think i was overly exhausted so all my emotions WERE GOING IN-SANE!

YOU MADE ME FEEL BETTER. THANK YOU LOL

oh jesus, this isn't your journal, Natalee, leave her alone omfg. SORRY.

Loved it!

Lol that was hilarious... I also son't think being a feminist means you can't like Twilight. after all, Bella held all the power..

the vegetarian part had me rolling. as a vegan i've always been completely insulted by the fact that sm got away with this bs.

this is hilarious.