Reviews for Mortal Coil
narutofanficlov321 chapter 14 . 1/2
this is so AWESOME! poor Mac!I feel so BAD! are you going to continue this? cause to be honest it's one of the best things that I've read EVER!
boyscouts83712 chapter 14 . 3/31/2016
Please continue the story. It's a great read. Poor Frankie and Mac.
jimelization chapter 14 . 11/3/2015
Will you continue this? It's too good to be left without an end!
jimelization chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
Very strong chapter!
kunglao4 chapter 14 . 10/20/2014
please make the next chapter soon, these have all been amazing
kunglao4 chapter 10 . 10/20/2014
Awesome
Lacila chapter 14 . 7/19/2014
Ooooooo...*whimper* For the love of god why :(
Lacila chapter 9 . 7/15/2014
Htg, I love your miserable asshole. :3
GumWin chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
:D omg I love this sooooo much. I wanna see Bloo though xD Just- Just a teeny tinny little bit more
Torotyrannus7 chapter 14 . 9/1/2013
This is good, this is good. I showed some of my buddies this chapter, and they all have similar comments.

Patrick the Behemoth: "Mrahahahahahagghgh!"

Keith the Hammerhead Salamander: "Snnakaahkahkahkagkagkagkhakah!"

Kale the Pineconer: "Krakkakkrakkakkrakkakahh!"

Bruiser the Roughhorn Ram: "Mrhehehrhehheheaahh!"

Groze the Grolgodon: "Grehahahehahahhawhawcro!"

Rostr the Beaked Whale: "Mwaaahhhhahahahahhehehhooo!"

To clarify, they are all laffing at dean.
Torotyrannus7 chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
His cat huh? I have good reason to believe that his cat would much rather run away and join wild sabre-toothed tabby cats in the Bermuda triangle
Torotyrannus7 chapter 10 . 8/29/2013
God, whatever any of you do, DO NOT show this chapter to Blitz. Under NO circumstances do you want to enrage a fully grown 18-foot spine-crushing jawed Vastatodon! The results would not be pretty!
Torotyrannus7 chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
I **********************g*** hate dean. And following is a list of comments on him from my friends in the Bermuda Triangle:

Chester the lesser snorthog: "Sccrrrrrr!rararara!snnnnnnaahh!"

Blitz the Vastatodon: "GRRAAAAAHHHHH!

Thunderfoot the titanishrew: "BRAAAAUUUGH! MRRAAAAAHHHG!"

Camo the jungle camouflage beast: "SSLAAAAAUUUUAAAAHHRRRRGGR!"

Sharif the blunt-snouted land whale: "MRRROOOOOAAAAAAAAHHHHG

Hurricane the thunderflyer: "RRROOOAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHGGG!"
I think you'll be able to understand what they are trying to say: "Dean is a fucked up motherfuck face!"
Hybrid-ler chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
This is a very good chapter, but I feel like I'm missing something like this isn't the first chapter. How was Terence good all of a sudden? What was wrong with him in the first place that was bad enough for his mother to kick him out of his own home? I'm sorry, but this was a little confusing to me. I hope this gets clearer as I read because I want everything to be explained so I can get up to speed on the story. Thank you for writing this! Appropriate so far and very amusing! 4.5/5 stars if there was a star-rating option. Hybrid-ler
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
Oh please update. I hope the ending will be a happy one.
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