Reviews for Mortal Coil
boyscouts83712 chapter 14 . 3/31/2016
Please continue the story. It's a great read. Poor Frankie and Mac.
jimelization chapter 14 . 11/3/2015
Will you continue this? It's too good to be left without an end!
jimelization chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
Very strong chapter!
kunglao4 chapter 14 . 10/20/2014
please make the next chapter soon, these have all been amazing
kunglao4 chapter 10 . 10/20/2014
Awesome
Lacila chapter 14 . 7/19/2014
Ooooooo...*whimper* For the love of god why :(
Lacila chapter 9 . 7/15/2014
Htg, I love your miserable asshole. :3
GumWin chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
:D omg I love this sooooo much. I wanna see Bloo though xD Just- Just a teeny tinny little bit more
Torotyrannus7 chapter 14 . 9/1/2013
This is good, this is good. I showed some of my buddies this chapter, and they all have similar comments.

Patrick the Behemoth: "Mrahahahahahagghgh!"

Keith the Hammerhead Salamander: "Snnakaahkahkahkagkagkagkhakah!"

Kale the Pineconer: "Krakkakkrakkakkrakkakahh!"

Bruiser the Roughhorn Ram: "Mrhehehrhehheheaahh!"

Groze the Grolgodon: "Grehahahehahahhawhawcro!"

Rostr the Beaked Whale: "Mwaaahhhhahahahahhehehhooo!"

To clarify, they are all laffing at dean.
Torotyrannus7 chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
His cat huh? I have good reason to believe that his cat would much rather run away and join wild sabre-toothed tabby cats in the Bermuda triangle
Torotyrannus7 chapter 10 . 8/29/2013
God, whatever any of you do, DO NOT show this chapter to Blitz. Under NO circumstances do you want to enrage a fully grown 18-foot spine-crushing jawed Vastatodon! The results would not be pretty!
Torotyrannus7 chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
I **********************g*** hate dean. And following is a list of comments on him from my friends in the Bermuda Triangle:

Chester the lesser snorthog: "Sccrrrrrr!rararara!snnnnnnaahh!"

Blitz the Vastatodon: "GRRAAAAAHHHHH!

Thunderfoot the titanishrew: "BRAAAAUUUGH! MRRAAAAAHHHG!"

Camo the jungle camouflage beast: "SSLAAAAAUUUUAAAAHHRRRRGGR!"

Sharif the blunt-snouted land whale: "MRRROOOOOAAAAAAAAHHHHG

Hurricane the thunderflyer: "RRROOOAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHGGG!"
I think you'll be able to understand what they are trying to say: "Dean is a fucked up motherfuck face!"
Hybrid-ler chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
This is a very good chapter, but I feel like I'm missing something like this isn't the first chapter. How was Terence good all of a sudden? What was wrong with him in the first place that was bad enough for his mother to kick him out of his own home? I'm sorry, but this was a little confusing to me. I hope this gets clearer as I read because I want everything to be explained so I can get up to speed on the story. Thank you for writing this! Appropriate so far and very amusing! 4.5/5 stars if there was a star-rating option. Hybrid-ler
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
Oh please update. I hope the ending will be a happy one.
spyrofan34 chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
IN YOUR FANCE DEAN YOU ASS HOLE AND BURN IN HELL LMAF sorry about that guys but i just feel that a cop does make peoples live hell should not be a cop at alll like dean
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