Masterpiece! Best story I’ve read. Thank you

Your are an excellent storyteller. Your novels are brilliant. Best P&P variations I have read. Thank you

Most excellent love story. You really are an excellent storyteller.

Asshole Richard just enters Pemberley and Darcy House whenever he feels like and now he goes straight into Elizabeth's bedroom.

The demise of the Bingley bitches, Charles and his sisters, should have been harsher.
Rather unfortunate that Collins inherited Longbourn. The ugly jealous Charlotte was desperate

Leeds is an arrogant ass. Even without a title, Darcy is a better man. So easily Elizabeth excepted what they said with no anger or hard feelings.

Colonel Fitzwilliam was an ass and so insignificant in this story. Elizabeth had better relations than him and the rotten Fitzwilliams.

This is a good story but I must agree, there were far too many characters who brought nothing to the story.

How is it that Wickham is suffering with the pox since he was at school and he hasn't gotten worse, yet Georgiana has changed within months?

Interesting story. But far too many characters who brought nothing to the story.

I am afraid I have a deteriorating eye condition, so although after a few paragraphs I felt I would really enjoy this story, unfortunately the size of the print meant the strain on my eye sight was too much to continue comfortably. If there is any way I could obtain a copy in a larger print form I would be grateful

Story would have been much BETTER despite the syphilis and all IF Charlotte Collins didn't, through her husband, inherit Longbourn.

The Gardiners weren't related to Elizabeth and Jane but benefited from the patronage of their connections. Once Mary and Lydia went to stay with the Darcys, they should have taken in their niece, Kitty who might have been saved!

Richard Fitzwilliam is an asshole, quick to temper, arrogant and a frustrated asshole who was of little significance in this story.

When Leeds and Holderness met Darcy and Elizabeth to reveal her parentage, they had not confronted her father Bennet at that stage neither anywhere else is it mentioned that they confronted him. AN OVERSIGHT OF THIS STORY! That bastard Bennet of Longbourn even died a good death. Too bad writers don't review their works