Kelly. We have issues. Your fluffy piece involved a Venus Flytrap. And it was still fluffier than mine, which ended witht he knowing they could never be together (fluff in general doesn't work with my writing style, I think.)

But still...You made Odd give Aelita a Venus Flytrap! That's genius. :D Seriously, I was smilign when I read that, it's such an Odd thing, and I loved how you made their relationship all sorts of unconventional, because that's really how it would be. :)

-Shadows

Very cute, and suitably fluffy! :D You've captured Odd's quirkiness well, and I like how you also showed Aelita's more cunning side. I love that he got her a Venus Flytrap and I laughed at this line: "I poked at the burlap gently. It was the day of lovers, but at the same time, this was Odd." So very true.

Nice work!