|Reviews for Children of the Night|
| earthROOTED1010 chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
It was funny! And I do get the impression of Them-ness, the way they go looking for trouble. If I'm allowed to suggest something (despite having no work on this site) it would be to find someone to Brit-pick your dialogue and interactions. I suppose you might be British ( and I'm not, so I'm no expert) but something seems off. It shows up the kids, sort of.
| Riandra chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Oh wow, that was awesome! I love how you've written the kids, they're perfect. (Can you tell I'm a mother?) Wish there was more than just one chapter, please write more about these three in future! :)