This is simply stunning. So beautifully written. So much better than some of those a million paged Clato stories! I am a huge Clato fan, I hope people write more stories like this! 3

This was one of the best clato one shots i have ever read!

This...is too good for words. I love the way you brought them together, in a way as simple as truth or dare. I'm really glad I read this. You should really write more Clato. This was really good

LONGER

Wow. I was shocked at the love scene but it was a good kind of shock! Loved it. Write more!

I must admit, this story is extremely good. No mistakes, clearly written, and simply stunning. It took my breath away. I am in awe. The end was extremely good. He realizes, hey, I was dead before I was born. Thanks to Clove, the girl he took a one-night-stand with. Totally amazing.

I think this is really good. I love it. Ive almost cried while reading this. I see it very well written and also with really great idea. Her: "I dont want to die like this..." I love it. I was smiling. But then, when it continued and I realized this is not a parody and they were gonna die, Ive become sad. I love Clato. And this is nice. :)

Brilliant story. Even though they didn't get a happy ending, I'm glad they had one great night together at least, and that they got to know what love was before they died.

please continue this if you have some ideas for a sequel

awesome story!

Sniffle...sniffle...WAH! WAH! THEY DIED! WAH!

it was really good! I'm writing my own Clove fanfic... But the basic story line is Cato and clove are already best friends, he voulenteers to keep her alive

It's amazing

I think you did a very good job at writing Clato! I also like the added part about Cato's sister! I also read the Taylor Lautner thing on your profile, lol!

oh my god! This was the best fan fix I've read so far! I love it, you're a really good writer!