Reviews for Schadenfreude
mochabanana chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
I was actually afraid it was sakura. Beautifully written. Thank you
closetbookworm chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
I really thought that was actually Sakura for a second. My gosh, your portrayal for Sasuke's emotions during that time were so dramatic that my heart was beating out of my chest while reading. Loved this one-shot so much. Faved. :)
Prizz chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
i like it. i can feel sasuke's emotions in that room and i almost said, thank god it is not sakura. orochimaru and kabuto are sick.
Szki chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
You lovely beautiful flawless amazing person, thank you so much for this.
xxxemiko.itooshixxx chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I was worried for a second! Great fic!
forgotten-things chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This is wonderful! How you captured Sasuke's characters, his emotions, everything! This is just.. I love this. I love it when Sasuke is written so in-character that I can see it happening in the manga.
Sakura-Star chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Well, I have to admit you took me by surprise.

I thought the person on that table was Sakura. I just though that she would come back to life as an experiment or something.

But yeah, it was very good.

I'm glad Sasuke suffered a bit.
Xitaris chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
this is *snif* so sad TT_TT why, i'm not sure but for some reason i wanna go hug sasuke now xD

really i thought for a moment it was sakura and i was like .. why ... O_O did she just totally kill sakura?

i liked it very much, maybe you should do this more in your free time, like drabbles? i would enjoy them x)

again, very nice i like how sasuke kinda fights with himself for caring, and then just murdering kabuto ( i don't like kabuto xD) so my inner me was kinda grinning like a psycho there for a moment whoops..
PruneNott chapter 1 . 4/16/2012

A new story !

I hope it will be as mind blowing as "Laying Claim", after all, it DOES seem promising !
Alia Rubrik chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
With or without Sakura, it was still really good :) I liked it very muchly so :)
domdom456789 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
O my gosh... My heart was pounding until I found out that that wasnt Sakura. And at least Sasuke cared enough for her!
Akiiko-Chan chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
First of all...

When i first read the sumary i thought it would be some kind of AU, in which Sasuke didn't know Sakura and he felt something when he saw her weird pink hair or asdfghj. jeje.

Then when Sasuke looks at the woman all dead... OMG, i felt such an horrible stomachache :S like seriously... ¬°Horrible!

And so the relief i felt when her eyes weren't green, they were blue.

Jeje, i wanted to throw myself to Sasuke when he tought of making Orochimaru and Kabuto pay. Aw~ that looks so sasuke-romance! i mean, still sasuke attitude but in a romantic way, a very very gentleman romantic sasuke attitude. LOVE HIM!


Anyways i also loved the way you explained how sasuke decided how he would create his new team.

Like always, great job! :D And don't worry, even if Sakura didn't appeared it was nice enough to get to know a little of Sasuke's feelings.

See you around and sorry for my grammar. I tried my best to not use spanglish :3
LovexxxSakuraUchiha chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Dark...but I like it! xD
Boyfriend Tees and Honey Bees chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Thank you for writing this story because I have a new favorite word! :D
E d e n chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I liked how you had the last addition to the team as the personified form of Sasuke's anger&madness, and I think that point could have definitely been expanded upon (the madness at least, because right now he doesn't seem crazy.. just having depressing thoughts and apathy, which are understandable seeing where he's been hanging the last couple years).

Next point is. Orochimaru's order. That seemed a bit abrupt, and while I know that was supposed to be the point, the way you had him make Sasuke come out at 2 a.m. of all times, to get... tattoos (for ninja purposes, yes but..) is bit of a /too/ convenient plot-point here. Perhaps, if you had worded it differently so it could be more believable or at least have the order phrased in a more Orochimaru-like way...

And last but not least, Sasuke's attachment to Sakura. While yes, this was a one-shot and just a plot-bunny, I felt Sasuke's sorta-maybe sentimental thoughts concerning Sakura was too intense, especially at this stage. He's never shown any friendly gesture toward her beyond the protect-thy-teammate way, and if anything, they were barely friends during their short year together. Now don't get me wrong, I am all for SasuSaku romance but love that comes out of thin air just seems superficial to me, even if it was a feeling that was not quite love. When he stabbed Kabuto for that 'joke,' I thought that was bit of a dramatic reaction; it would have been more understandable if it was his mother he saw on that operation table. But Sakura? No. If you want to make it more believable though, you'll have to expand on his feelings for her, through flashbacks or something- and no, I definitely do not mean stretch his feelings into disproportional sizes. Gradual development is key in /any/ story, and being able to do that in just one-shot is what makes the good writers stand out from the amateurs [; & you definitely have the writing ability for it, so I have no doubt you can do it.
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