Reviews for Mary's Story
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
I tried to read your story, but I could not ignore all the spelling errors in the first chapter.
Tearzofthestarz chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Please let me know when you update this!
can't think chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
well this just got complicated. hahah.

dang. I'm still torn. I really like her with Henry, but I do love best friend relationships. oh pooh!
HalfBloodPrincess71 chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Ooh, what will Mr Porter do? Please hurry! xxx
swathy chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Umm in your 1st chap you say that mary is the youngest, she is not. She is actually the middle sister the third child of the bennets.
HalfBloodPrincess71 chapter 3 . 4/28/2012
Ooh, WHAT IS IN THAT LETTER? I wanna know it right now. Please hurry with the next chapter! 3 xxxxx
can't think chapter 3 . 4/27/2012
awww, poor Mary. love sucks! lol

was Henry tossing and turning thinking about Mary?
hrhdana chapter 3 . 4/27/2012
ooh, looking forward to that letter!
Dreamer014 chapter 3 . 4/27/2012
I think you accidentally put this chapter with the wrong story. Lol its an honest mistake...just thought I'd let you know
Ebzenka chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
The story might be good, but:

1. please watch your writing, there are simply too many mistypings and misspellings, even in the names of the characters (Darcy/Darcey, Bingly/Bingley and many more).

2. Watch the facts in the original books. Mary had to be much more three years ago than 16. Lydia was freshly 16. Kitty wastold to be 2 years older, so over 17 or better 18. Mary was the middle daughter, so she had to be at least 18, but more probably 19. So now, 3 years later, she should be 22. I suppose if i'd sought more I'd find more mistakes, but I do not want to pry.
Avanell chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
Interesting update ;) Go, Mary!
can't think chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
dun dun DUN! looks like Henry is JEALOUS! hahaha. Mary and Henry seem like they will be fun to read about. You had me torn for a second there. I really like love/hate relationship but I love it when girl-guy best friends end up together. but I guess if John is spoken for I can root for Henry/Mary.
Red Writer chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
Very intriguing - Cant wait to see where you take Mary.
hrhdana chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
can't think chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
haha, Henry's a jerk! you got me interested! :)
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