|Reviews for Itadaki no Hecate|
| Junky chapter 30 . 2/18
I honestly underestimated the SnS fanfiction section and must have last visited a couple of years ago... but it turns out that you've written most of the good stuff here. :)
| DeuceMs chapter 6 . 12/31/2013
So far, Eternity and Alliance, as a whole, have been better than Itadaki no Hecate up to now. I am starting to really like Hecate though. The way you are able to command sympathy and understanding for her is amazing. Though I still favor Eternity and Alliance, there's still 25 more chapters to read. Who knows? I just might be won over. I wonder what lies ahead.
| Nitewind chapter 30 . 12/17/2013
I must say I'm liking your story so far. In fact I liked it so much I made a tropes page for it: /FanFic/ItadakiNoHecate
Please note that it is in need of some TLC at the moment.
| Schwer-Muta chapter 30 . 12/16/2013
You know something's good when you run out of chapters, and you're a little sad you found it when you did because it's not done.
I like the characterization, and I believe why the things that are different are the way they are. There are times I would have liked more deviation, but it's still interesting looking at events through a different lens.
The comparisons drawn between Shana and Hecate have altered how I look at the relationship between the two. Yuji too, really. I think that's why HecatexYuji works just as well as ShanaxYuji: Really, they're both about two people trying to fill the other's emptiness.
Hopefully this time it won't end in the two waging war against each other.
| CapoExecutor chapter 30 . 12/5/2013
So Shana is slowly getting into sync with things and even Alastor seems to sound as if it's more than a good learning experience. It's going to be a blast
Oh Yuji, if you only had an appetite like Kantaro... Hmm... Now if Hecate decided to use white food coloring to disguise some shichimi as rice and mix them into his meal...
| ariados26 chapter 30 . 12/4/2013
Well, well. This is certainly getting interesting.
Just a nitpick though, a couple of chapters back I think, when you talked about the Snake of the Festival's failed plan, you used the word 'successor' instead of predecessor for the first Blazing haired flaming eyed hunter.
As for this chapter... rice with no viand is a really cruel punishment. Really fun to read though.
But I especially liked the part where Marco called Margery 'Backstabbing B*tch.' Yeah...
I just hope the chanter of elegies does not have a breakdown when she learns the complete truth about silver.
My rating for this chapter you wrote. (disregarding any possible grammatical error and basing only on content): 10/10
Looking forward to your future updates. Over and out.
| Savaris chapter 30 . 12/3/2013
Looks like I've caught up to the latedt chapter... you've done well in character development, though some people go all "ZOMG! Wer Action Scenez!" and all that.
It's good to see Shana open up a little while being "tsun" all the while. Though, I suppose she won't be as developed as canon Shana by virtue of Yuji meeting Hecate first and that she considers him an "enemy" and that's not counting how stubborn she is in the first place...
Anyway, what I spied with my little eye so far about those shout out you mentioned would be Ben-To, Kore Wa Zombie and ofcourse The Avengers. Well, here's to me hoping the next chapter won't be so far into the future. Keep at it, JohnPeacekeeper.
| Savaris chapter 28 . 12/3/2013
Ah, ever the "Tsun" as always Shana...
| Savaris chapter 24 . 12/3/2013
It's so dang good! You really should have more following than this!
Seriously, even though Yuji's path has diverged, it seems that he can still bring out Shana's or rather her voice actresses' catchphrase... awesome. Looking forward to season two!
| Savaris chapter 16 . 12/2/2013
Hah! Hecate and Yuji's watching ZnT? Well... considering the female lead, or rather her voice actress...
| Savaris chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
Freaking awesome battle.
| Savaris chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Man, I've been reading as though I was in a kind of trance till I got to the part where Heca-chan explains her circumstances to Yuji's mother... Nice going, Hecate! Oh man, it was gold I tell you! Just imagining her saying all those things in a serious face just cracked me up!
Anyway I'm disappointed in myself that it took me this long read this and since it apparently already reached season two! Now then, onto the next chapter...
| Sacchin chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
I like how this is going so far! Especially with Yuuji starting to affect Shana... This could be the start of a battle between the Hecate and Shana! I hope Hecate wins though. xD I will be waiting for your next update!
| BloodseekerX chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
I only noticed the ben-to...what, are there more?
| EternalxNightxWalker chapter 30 . 12/1/2013
Amazingly well written as always. Loved the whole drowning bit with Yuji and Hecate. xD I can see a Margery chapter pretty soon since she is gonna be training like Hell! And the calm before the storm eh? That's how you end a light hearted chapter! Can't wait until the next chapter!
P.S I only got the Avengers reference ;-;