Reviews for Beneath the Surface
Aliyah-Shalom-David34 chapter 37 . 6/2/2013
Absolutly loved it! I couldnt stop reading! I hope you post a sequel soon!
NCIS FTW chapter 37 . 5/8/2013
Good, I think they would make awesome parents.
livyisnotfromtheshire chapter 37 . 4/30/2013
Ermehgerd this is one grand finale!

I love it! The ending was especially well written, and very emotional! Well done!

Can't wait for more stories!

-Livy xoxo
ringsofakhaten chapter 37 . 4/28/2013
asdfghjklasdfghjkl, if only this would happen in the show :P

So anywhoooo *clears throat* *straightens bow tie* *brushes off skirt* *clears throat two more times* *drinks three bottles of water* *jogs across the nation* *bike rides down a hill* *sings national anthem to warm up voice* *cracks knuckles* *cracks neck* *cracks back with the help of someone* *hits post limit on tumblr* *watches all of NCIS in order again* *rolls into the sun* *sits down and starts to write this review* I really liked this chapter. :3 Bye.

Lol, I kid. But really, I'm definitely glad I've been able to read and review your fic as you updated it. It's been fun sharing the experience. A sequel wouldn't hurt, but there are some things that could stand alone, and this definitely can. Not that I wouldn't read it, but it's better maybe if it just stayed as is. And if you wrote and published another story, I would def without a doubt read it. Just make sure you add Zibbs and Zabby and all that stuff I love ;) hahahaha xD

I love this, and I love you. Thanks for writing it. :3
hslacer chapter 37 . 4/28/2013
So sad this had to end. Maybe your next story could be them becoming parents.
hslacer chapter 36 . 1/13/2013
Wonderful chapter. Love the "family" feeling despite the danger.
conservativegirl chapter 36 . 1/11/2013
Awww, great chapter!:)
livyisnotfromtheshire chapter 36 . 1/10/2013
YAY! An update! This was so fluffy! I love that :3

OMG WTH HAPPENED IN SHABBAT SHALOM?! I still haven't managed to watch of Season 10 yet! I need spoilers!

Also, I'll PM you later - my phone charger kinda broke, and the phone in question is out of charge :/ So no Kik for a while! :(

But yeah, I liked the fluffiness :3 Keep 'em comin!
-Livs xoxo
ringsofakhaten chapter 36 . 1/9/2013
Hehehe

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Tony just couldn't hold it in much longer, could he? ;) xD It was an awesome chapter, Kstew. I will hit you if I hear you say anything different. IT WAS PERF, OKAY. Good. :P
wisegirl71301 chapter 36 . 1/9/2013
OMG OMG OMG OMG SUPERB PLEASE POST MORE SOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN
DS2010 chapter 36 . 1/9/2013
Cookie baking was just too cute adding all that sugar... oh boy sugar highs
Lilliana-Lissa HathawayDavid97 chapter 35 . 11/7/2012
OH MY GOD! I ABSOLUTELY love this story! I cant wait fot the next chapter!

xx Lilli xx
NCIS FTW chapter 35 . 10/30/2012
frisky ZIva
conservativegirl chapter 35 . 10/29/2012
awww, sweet chapter! I like that we got to look in on every couple/ family :)
Em chapter 35 . 10/29/2012
Love your story, loving the happy endings for all the family! Only found it today and have read all your chapters so far!
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