|Reviews for Hollow Drug|
| PanteraFang chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I loved it!
And I'm off to read the continuation!
| animeloverjanet chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
this was a great fanfiction! i loved it D
| Ambie Lovina chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
This was good! I like how you started with how it all happened, because others just jump into the relationship even though they're enemies. Like, it just can't suddenly happen; there has to be a specific event that completely changes everything.
Oh, and for when they're talking, you should use quotation marks like:
"Now can I come in?"
| D3ATHR0SE chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
I luv this story :D...maybe u should rite a sequel where Grimm and Ichi get back together :),maybe...(just a suggestion, dont think im damandin' i jus think it would be nice)
| ezcap1st chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Eh, your writing wasn't that bad! The bribe and toll part was amusing and sweet... So sad it didn't last.
| melissen chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
That was hot. And believe that Grimmjow lives too. That's the only reason I still read Bleach every week...
| gixxxhe chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Bad writing? What the hell told you THAT? Seriously, you have to find him/her and beat the living lights out of them! .\_/. I strongly disagree!
Amazing story...Grimmjow's flustered reactions to his feelings about Ichigo were the cutest things ever. Nice description! And i hope you will continue it, because i'm sort of wondering if they'll meet again...
| Nekokratik chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
The ending is sad! Hopefully Grimm is really alife. Oh and great story XDD IT's cute!
| Aerrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
An interesting story, I have to say! Although, I think that my favorite part has to be the ending. I especially like how you include the fact that it was never really confirmed if Grimmjow is alive or dead. A sequel is definitely a must. *thumbs up*
| LovelessTyrant chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Okay, I'm basically breaking my promise to one of my favorite authors of reviewing one fic at a time because I haven't finished reviewing his 31 chapters (and ongoing) fic.. I'm still on chapter 5.. OMG.. It's gonna take years for me to finish that.. (Sorry for the rant, it's an undesirable habit, but bear with me..)
Even if it means breaking my promise, I just had to tell you that you writing is not bad at all! You should have more confidence because the story was very interesting and was very engaging (in my opinion)
There were just some typographical errors like pray (which I believe should be prey) and simple and very ignorable grammar errors.. I don't wanna be too critical so I won't mention it.. I'm here to praise your work, not to condemn it.. LoL! But maybe you need a Beta? *wink wink* (I'm offering myself to be a Beta for your Bleach fics, LoL.. Though I don't have a Beta profile and cannot officially be a Beta since I'm so lazy to write a fic.. I'd rather read and read and read and review! LoL)
Honestly, I did enjoy reading this fic.. Normally, (If it is a GrimmIchi M rated fic), I'd just scan the page and look for the smut, hahaha.. But your story compelled me to read diligently through and through, so I say Kudos! You had my attention throughout the fic..
This is just the second Bleach fic I've ever reviewed, but I was just very alarmed that you think you were a bad writer.. I'm here to give you some confidence! I an your conscience and I say you are an awesome writer! LoL!
Well, hope I made your day coz you sure made mine.. c(_)v
| Nightlydemon chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Out of every single sentence, I only found defiantly one, and possibly two poorly written ones. The descriptive sentence about the building shadows doesn't need the last three words, though the thought behind the sentence was exquisite. Your style is excellent and far from bad, so who ever told you that it was is a liar! Keep writing because practice does, indeed, make perfect.
| clio1111 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
THE HELL? DO A SEQUEL!
| MagicalDagger chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I like the part about the vine rape 3
| IILesGeMeAuxII chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
I really loved this. :3 Even though it's a little sad at the end I still really like it...Ever thought of giving this a sequel? :3 *kitty eyes*