Reviews for Rain
kimmy4eytj chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Such deep sorrow Everett feels with TJ gone now. It wrenches your heart and clearly both Matt and Chloe feel it as well. This picture of Young standing at TJ's graveside is haunting. Is he crying? Is he raging into the black cold night against the cruel fates which took his soulmate?

And yet, as Chloe says, he won't do anything to harm himself because he must be there for their children. Two small pieces of TJ to help him as much as he will help them live into the future.

I still wipe my eyes after every reading of this story. You have a way with your writing that is so powerful; so present inside Young.

Bravo on this story.
shestarsky chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Oh this was so sad, but so beautiful that I don't even mind the sadness, poor Young.