Reviews for The Truth: Unveiled |
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![]() ![]() Please continue this two words cute |
![]() ![]() i really like ur stories please can u write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That makes sense now. I can't believe Tina had a fake pregnant stomach most of the time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is just amazing. Abella and I have been waiting for this, and now that we've got it, we're amazed at how onderful it is. (Serena forced me to read it, even though I was busy reading TailsxCosmo stuff, stuff that we both like, and I loved it!) Keep up the good work, as my teachers would say! From happy sisters, -Serena and Abella |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. I actually felt what each character was feeling threw out the whole story, especially Amy's. How you made her feel threw out the break up, relationship, Tina, and Sonic. I actually had a feeling Tina had something up her sleeve about the whole pregnancy. Either than that, fantastical story. Couldn't wait to see the ending. Although, I REALLY wanted to see Sonic FINALLY propose to Amy. Also if she would actually have his baby. But I have a question, if Sonic and Amy had sex so many times and he came into her, how come Amy isn't pregnant or actually went to the docter to find out? (Not the hospital they have been going to of course) Oh well. This kept me in supense and thats what I like in a story. Keeping readers there till the end. Fantastic, simply astonishing. Hope to see good writing out of you ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome one-shot XD Take that Tina, hahaha! Glad all is good again! Can't wait for the next one, the proposal! :) You did great once again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! You should definitely continue with Couples Retreat! ;D |
![]() ![]() Do a sequel wif dem on d ski trip make it like why did I get married 1 |
![]() ![]() Omg thx thx u I am so in luv with this :'D Yea take that Tina...i dnt like her...lol Great story and hope u do more Peace _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, happy end, now I can die happy! Great story like always, laughted so much when Tina imitated the Scooby-Do phrase, also how you ended it, it was perfect, keep it up 3 wish to read more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Oh my! Shouldnt they have been kicked out of restaurant? Oh...and I totally knew something was up with Tina XD...wait she said that wasnt the end of her...will she be showing up in the real sequel? :O Hmm Couples Retreat...that sounds kinda boring...hmmm I KNOW Deuce Cloister...deuce is a synonym for Couples and cloister is a synonym for retreat...same thing but...awesomer XD Post soon...I love this ongoing story 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man I just love this story and I hope to read more XD |