Reviews for Runaway Home
Pineapple3000 chapter 19 . 3/8/2017
This chapter is highly unrealistic.
Guest chapter 18 . 12/15/2016
I like your story! There were just one thing- I think that you were trying to use the Swedish word for no at the beginning of the chapter, but accidently used the word for noone. If you would like to correct this in the future use nej.
Have a lovely christmas and keep writing.
Emma from Sweden
Tarcchi chapter 18 . 9/10/2016
"No" in Swedish is "Nej" and not "Ingen".
"Ingen" means nobody. Other than that, good chapter
He will knock four times chapter 9 . 12/27/2015
I'm sorta wondering how old Sherlock is in this. In the canon, John is older by 2-3 years. However, here John is 16 but we never see how old Sherlock is.
Jankjay chapter 25 . 11/27/2015
I really enjoyed this piece. I know it was a lot of work but you did it! Yea! If you go back, you'll also realize how far you came as a writer in just this one piece. Your writing got better with each chapter, which is always the goal.
Here are just a couple of suggestions to make it even smoother. When you use dialogue, attribute it in the same sentence. For example: "Thank you," John said. That way your reader knows who is talking and it flows better.
Also, beware of homonyms, words that sound alike but are spelled differently. For example: here and hear, or past and passed.
You have a gift for storytelling. Once you've refined the tools, you'll be awesome.
Thank you for sharing your work with me.
FandomHopperV2.0 chapter 22 . 9/25/2015
Honestky I thought I was going to find "inconceivable" somewhere in there, not "as you wish." Oh well. :3
EmberWolfe1717 chapter 25 . 6/23/2015
Amazing! Really a beautiful piece of work. So well written and kept with the characters and just a capturing story. I could hardly wait to be done with work and school to come home and read this! I'm about to start the sequel and I hope it's as good as this one :)
EmberWolfe1717 chapter 18 . 6/22/2015
It's cool bc none of us know what those other languages are either. Btw this stories amazing. I usually just write one big review at the end but wow :)
Consultinghubbie chapter 22 . 1/5/2015
Ah I saw that princess bride reference!
jenn008 chapter 26 . 11/18/2014
Love it!
occasionallywrite chapter 26 . 10/19/2014
Such an incredible story! Absolutely love it.
zixxus01 chapter 10 . 9/22/2014
okay, so out of curiosity how old is sherlock in this because i cant figure it out and for some reason its bugging me. Ps, loving it so far.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/25/2014
"As you wish" oh how perfect. I'm in love with your story, I just want to run up to John and hug him and tell him it's ok.
Kayla chapter 25 . 2/4/2014
Beautiful Ending!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Horrible start
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