|Reviews for A Series of Firsts|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/23
Thanks for writing. ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
This is very amusing. Thanks for writing it. ;)
| Kendra PJO chapter 1 . 4/30
love the idea, especially the last one, but I think the 'talk' between Halt and Abelard could be more IC. I doubt Abelard would know who king Duncan is, or EXACTLY how far behind the horsemen were. Also, Ranger horses don't usually complain, let alone say they are bored. The other sections, however, were flawless.
May inspiration be with you always!
| bubbles chapter 2 . 1/4
some very funny events for Halt to have gone through. i wonder what would have gone down had will found out about these hilarious events? or maybe Horace? Alyss even? hang on, i'm laughing so hard at the looks on their faces i cant breathe.
:D :D :D
| Neophilic chapter 2 . 1/3
...just beautiful. ;)
| NymphadoraTonks11 chapter 1 . 1/2
Bravo, Halt. You just shot the king.
I love that line!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE! I'M GOING CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZY!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Could you pretty pretty pleeeeeeeeeease write a second chapter?
| RascalJoy chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh dear, this is HILARIOUS!
A little OOC, but hey, it's okay to step out of the boundaries every once in awhile ;D
Keep up the GREAT work!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
LOL LOVE IT!
| maggiestarjump chapter 6 . 3/31/2013
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/9/2013
Ahahahahaha! He shot the king?! Priceless! I know you said you wouldn't continue but would you please continue this? It's too amazing not to.
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/10/2013
That's jokes halt shot at Duncan he he he
| DontMakeNoSense chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
"She is a monster!"... OH MAH GAWD
| DontMakeNoSense chapter 1 . 2/10/2013