Reviews for Come In
ipreferwestside chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
madcloisfan chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Loved it
Mathiilde3 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
This was utterly wonderful! It made me smile very much, so so sweet!

Erin chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Cute story! They are such a beautiful family. And you are a fantastic writer.

Anyone else notice,though, that the kids are named for Harry Potter's parents...? Nice!
JeuxDeVagues chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
More Shel Silverstein! Castle is SUCH AN ADORABLE DADDY. All I could think for most of this was "Awwwww" EXCEPT. EXCEPT. Then you pulled out the daddy/daughter convo of stories and writers and "It's never just a story" and I love that, always, and this such a unique way of bringing it up. And then it's "You make it quiet, Daddy" and MINNIE and it's back to "Awwwww." This is what you've reduced me to, Joy. Incoherent aww-ing. Thank you.
cartruck chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
This universe must never end. Ever.
Austcastlefan chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Ooh wow, soooo sweet! I love this Minnie-Lillian-universe :)
Tango Mike Charlie chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I was just thinking.. Minnie-verse and no Minnie? ;-) I love how she's a storyteller. Very sweet story.
ColieMacKenzie chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
This was absolutely adorable! So many images here to love and savor. I loved the little details on how and where he woke up, snuggled against Kate's body, and you captured that sleep-warm coziness so well that you have when you wake up with someone you love. What also came across really well was that magic, that sense of wonder that Lilian had, all bright-eyed and excited, telling her story, the whole experience of it. I really love how she seems a combination of mom and dad - with her storytelling ability, the never-quiet mind, yet she has a level of consideration and concern (when she worries about his not getting sleep because of her) that I can see coming from Kate.

"You make everything quiet." - yes indeed! :)
SomeKindaWonderful chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
That is so sweet. I loved it.
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Copop chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
So sweet. So fluffy. Man, I love it :)
Fictional Mind chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Awww so adorable :D
Mark C chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
This was very sweet.

I really enjoyed how Lilian went to get her father out of bed to tell him a dream she had. The way you had her story, you could tell she was Castle's daughter.

The ending was great with him telling the little girl about how he met Kate's cat, a kitten at the time, Minnie.
DelphineCormyay chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Aw :') So cute! You make Castle the best dad EVER!
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