Reviews for Play
PrincessWraven chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
This is funny and sweet at the same time, but I think it should be under "Legend of Korra" instead of A:tLA? Just saying :)
Bell.Bit chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
lolz this should have been a series
Amelia Letter chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Hahaha this was hilarious! Great job :)
Leah N. Cross chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
LOL that Was awsome! :D

Very funny very funny :) Can't wait to read your other story
Keys chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
It's a very cute piece! I liked it! :D
stay.traught.i'm.deactivated chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Hah, I phrased a sentence wrong before. I was supposed to read a passage in class, but I was drinking from a water bottle at that moment. Then I said out loud to my teacher, "Sorry, I was drinking." The whole class erupted into giggles. XD

This is a good example of word fail. XD
HinamoriUme chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
WOOOOOOOOOOOO SEXY! Ahem. Well written. Few minor errors, but great otherwise.
Emmy chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
I loved it! You could even continue it and do a sPin off if you wanted!:)
Nocturnals chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Okey! That was very funny! I love it! Mako was so cute, I, definitely, want to translate your story into Spanish, if you give me your permission.

Of course, if you leave me translate the fic, I will specify that you are the original author.

I can promise you it will be a good translation.

If you don't leave me, fine, not problem!- No drama, in Argentina-. It's just an idea.

Kisses. Keep writing like this!

Shaybo27 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Nice teasing 'n all :)
Freak-With-Issues chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Ah, romantic tension between the lovebirds. I love the hilarious teasing between those two!
Ashclaw10 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Elle Seren chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
D'awwww...Super cute! I love how he came back to get revenge in the end. Makes me curious what she'd follow up with..but this was great just on its own! :)
bitter-scotch030 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Completely Adorable! It is a great story and I enjoyed reading it! :)
jsarahs chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
*Fangirl squeal.*

1 word. Epic.
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