Reviews for Breaking Free
Anna Doherty chapter 1 . 4/16
I totally loved your one shot. I look forward to more of them. Anna
AshleyStewart09 chapter 1 . 2/22
This was very good
Tarrasen.Sun chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Holy shit, you have no idea how much I wished this was longer and multi-chaptered! That's the level of love I have for this work! 3 Amazinnggggg...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
Great story
andrewpine chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Loved this.I am always happy when fairy boy Eddie and Alice get what they both that Charlotte died,but Peter and Vicky make a good on to your next finished these one shots. Kevin.
Tilty.bbb chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
This was a great read
Mr. and Ms. Cuddles chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Still one of my favorite stories. I could reread this all the time. I wish you would write more good stories, so I am going to go to your authors page right now. Surely you have some more...if not please have mercy on me and write something!
TinaF chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Loved it!
litanolastar chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
Love it.
jlove34 chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
Awww. Awkward Jasper is so cute! The big, bad Major stuttering over his words. So endearing.

Glad the Cullens got axed by the Volturi. Surprised that, even though Bella was a shield, that Aro wasn't actively searching for her. After reading Edward and Alice's minds, I would've thought he'd be curious about her potential—especially after the bar incident where she was shielding herself and Vic.

Great story. Thanks for sharing.
killer4853 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Brief yet perfectly told, beautiful, funny, vamped out lemons ツ, sweet, romantic and most importantly: so JASPER-Y, baby!

Thoroughly enjoyed.
catgrl chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
Ahh that was a very good story...
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I’d have to sell his properties back to him for two bucks each because I needed to make a profit somewhere.


Stepford Carlisle and Esme. Lovely.

Well, the Volturi took care of that little Cullen problem.

I loved Peter’s proposal to Victoria!

And they all lived happily ever after! For ever and ever and evermore.
blinddivinity chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
That proposal cracks me up each and every time I read it. I love it! You are so funny.
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