|Reviews for The Amazing Transformation Of A Sue|
| pikaree1 chapter 4 . 4/8
Wait, here's an idea: have the Varia deal with the attitude adjustment! Or find a bunch of depressingly normal people as side characters, because aren't Mary-Sues partially made the way the are to outshine the quirky characters? With a bunch of depressingly normal people, there's no point! She's even more of a freak!
Or Hana. I feel like Hana would be able to decimate her. Because Hana is awesome with secret super powers. Or not.
Anyway, I like your story! :) The concept of 'fixing' a Mary Sue is interesting, and the way you write it is hilarious! Most importantly, you haven't made the guys break character and you have Chrome an important part in the story, and for that I believe you deserve a medal.
| VongolaXII chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Love it :))
| NezumiShion4Life chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Oh god X'D ROFL X'D Im looking forward to your update. I cant wait to see her completely un-sued. oh how happy i'll actually be lol X'D
| TheParadoxicalOxymoron chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
This review button is pretty. Ohhhhh So let's kick this review off by saying fantastic job and all! However how is this gonna help her return home anyway? Ah well, good crack is nice crack. I rather like how you insert the "sponsorship thingy". Its hilarious! :D
And so, next phase, finding a normal name for the Sue? Like Yomi for instance. I don't know, just tossing out random suggestions. But why do I have this feeling that the Sues from the other planet will not recognize her and then proceed to toss her out? She'll be stuck with the gang... And will she have a flame of any kind? /shot
My ramblings have come to an end, I hope this helps for a faster update! Ciao!
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
"Defeat the evil to the EXTREEEEEEEEEME!" I agree!
M-Mukuro...just what did he SEE in there? I pity you, Pineapple Head. Here, have a pineapple. *holds up pineapple* Reminds me, I have pineapple chunks in my fridge...Mmmm...
NUUUUUU! Hands off my- I mean our Tunafish! Get'cher grubby mitts off'a 'im! Just kidding~! Anyways, update soon!
| TheParadoxicalOxymoron chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
Ah. Derp. Collapses on floor, twitching in a heap. Little miss perfect gonna get knocked down a couple of pegs... Cant wait to see how you accomplish that~ - Cue holy choir music in background- I just love your over exaggeration so much! Its super duper hilarious. Its a bird, its a plane, no its A Mary-Sue! Gah run for it!
| VongolaXII chapter 3 . 4/24/2012
NO! Mukuro you can posess me, not Manami! Posess meee...
P/s: update soon :D
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
To be honest, I don't think you can change the Sue. It's etched in her DNA to be a Sue. So, who do you call? SUE HUNTERS! /shot
Ahaha! How did she live that long indeed. And still lookong so beautiful! Tell me, Miss Manami, what kind of skin products do you use for those would-be wrinkles? XD Poor Gokudera. I thought he would be resistant, but no one can be *sighs and shakes head*
Great chapter! And see, I have this issue with not responding to PMs. I call it laziness. But I really want to, I swear! So I will try to next time! *challenge accepted face*
| VongolaXII chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
Haha, this is funny xD The Sue can find her true love BUT please don't let it be Mukuro or Yamamoto...
| PhantasmSakura chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I'm just loling all over the house. This is seriously funny. Please continue it!
| VongolaXII chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
:D Looking foward on how a mary-Sue can be Un-sued :D
I'll keep this alerted...
| Amplifyingly Loud chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Firsr reviewer! I think...
I LOVE Sue fics! They're hilarious! And so far, you're doing a great job. She's just so beautiful! Our KHR boys will just LOVE her! Tell me, is Gokudera immune-ish? Since he's a rabid UMA fan? And Yamamoto's so funny!
What do you mean by un-sue the Sue?
Please update soon!