Reviews for The Brief Taste Of Happiness
angeliena chapter 1 . 6/1
Oh John and Leila so sweet!
PapayaK chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Awww, sweet, thanks!
Fansquee chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Very sweet ad beautifully written.
ravenhusker chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
The scene with Reese asleep while holding Leila, was touching, but sad.
FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Wuchel1 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
That was a sweet missing scene that I would have loved to see in the actual episode.
Thank you for sharing this.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Awww... Finch...


But this is sweet! In many way... though sad too mostly...

Tanba Josav chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I can just picture Reese and Leila fast asleep, Reese slightly vulnerable. It says a lot that he trusts Finch enough to allow himself to do that.

Not to mention a very sexy image. ;-)
Haiza Tyri chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Awwww, Reese holding the baby and sleeping. *sob* So beautiful.
In your third paragraph, you have the word "traks." It's spelled "tracks."
NiennaTru chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
This was absolutely wonderful! "Baby Blue" is one of my very favorite episodes of POI, and this was a really great "missing moment" to that episode. Sweet, melancholy, and funny as well. Very well done. I'm adding this to my favs. Thanks for writing!
farmgirl1964 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This was so sweet! I barely remember this episode, thanks to a defective DVR payer and the inability to find episodes online.

I DO remember the supermarket scene with Carter and Finch...too cute!

Also how Finch panicked when he found the baby with a gernade, even though it was ONLY a tear gas gernade.

TheThirdAetas chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
This was an idea I always had about that episode...we didn't get enough of an insight to how Finch felt about the lack of a "conventional life" but he must've felt a longing just as bad as Reese's.

It's portrayed very nicely in here.

Thank you for posting this story.

Desertfyre chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Beautiful story that fit perfectly in the episode!
Hilary Parker chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
PJTL156 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Aw, thank you for calling me amazing. :) *blushes* And I rather enjoy editing. :D I'll do it any time. :) Sorry it took me a while to read this after it was posted. I've been extremely busy lately with school. DX'

I saw that this should be: ""What? You mean this isn't the first time you've kidnapped A baby?"" This should be: "As he finally reached the room they used as base he looked around, FINDING no sign of Reese and Leila." :) I believe you mean: "He sounded ASLEEP with his arms protectively surrounding Leila's small frame as she slept atop his chest." :) And this: "This moment, holding in his arms a kidnapped baby in a dusty, old library that supposedly did not EXIST." :) Should be: "He himself had never longed FOR a child." :) Should be: "he wouldn't change HAVING Will in his life for anything." :) Loved that you inserted that part. I loved it. :D *heart* This: "They still didn't know why the machine had given them Leila's number, who wanted to get rid of her or why." Should have a , after the her. :) And all the Capslocked words are the ones to be changed, by the way. :) Though I'm sure you realized that. :) Loved it, and thanks for making me your Beta. I'm honored. :D
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