|Reviews for Too Fast|
| Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 2 . 7/22/2015
I'Ve read this story before and because I loved it so much, I come back to read it again. The plot was great, everyone was in character, and most of all, it features the bond between Kid and Flash. I only have a couple critiques. Superboy is able to hear Flash and Bat's conversation. I know he has superhearing, but what he can hear from the battle scene is totally dependent from what the camera mic pics up and the camera mic is not sensitive to pick up Flash and Batman's private conversation, especially Batman's so superboy hearing all that would have been impossible. Another thing, the scheduling for the funeral and the statue happened way too quickly. Kid Flash just "died". Funeral planning takes awhile and he would have been buried a week later at the most. It also wasn't Iris's call to make (to the public's knowledge). Kid Flash's alter ego family and the Flash get to make that call. The most the city could do without KF's family's call would be to hold a memorial Party for Kid. If they wanted to hold a public funeral, they can only do so of Flash gives them permission. Statue planning, I imagine takes a while too, having to go through permits, artistic planning, location picking, and city/public approval before an artist can even say a statue will be built. So the whole statue being built tomorrow would have also been impossible.
| Dash of Everything chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Bruh, i luv it
| jada.books chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
So awesome! Just a suggestion, maybe you could've described what the speed force looked like? That would been really cool.
| jada.books chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
The quote was when Wally was in the speed force and he was like, "it's cool in here" or something like that.
| Nobody chapter 2 . 6/4/2014
Great story! Keep it up!
| Peanut Butter Rules chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
| Violently Red chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
AIEEEEE! Oh my God you just put me through hell and then heaven. Great job, it was amazing! :))
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2013
So, apparently, if two people of different (or the same) genders die, and then magically come back to life, they get together...
| llThatOneGirll chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
Damn it, don't u dare cry Potter don't u dare cry *cries* dang it!
And of course robin and his hacking skills 'tt'
| Phoenix51 chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
| KyaTessa chapter 2 . 3/8/2013
I love this story! I wish this would be continued.
| Zinfer chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
So sweet :) and i think it's cool u wrote about flash before u delved into the young justice league.
| Zinfer chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Ermagersh! That was so sweet and wonderful! A nice dose of angst but with a happy nondepressing ending. I loved it! And it's so hard to find nice hurtcomfort for kf. It's like everyone either wants to kill him or nothing at all XD
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
Is this the end? Brilliant story luv spitfire. In my opinion you shouldhav roy come in sobbing he sees wally and you know some bromance.
| guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2012