|Reviews for Baby Don't Cry|
| sydcoshow chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
Seriously, Hollie. How can you write so amazingly? I don't think this is humanely possible. ARE YOU HUMAN? xx
| TheClosetedThespian chapter 6 . 6/16/2012
Finally had a chance to read all the chapters you've written so far and it's really, really good! I love your attention to detail and how well you captured the emotions of each of the characters. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
| BroadwayBabeWA chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
Yay! Another update! This is really good and I'm really enjoying it! Keep writin'!
| BroadwayBabeWA chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
OH UPDATE! Good chapter, and the ending makes me want more! Keep going!
| wickedozgirl chapter 4 . 5/25/2012
Ooooh bitch fight! ;)
| Broadway Babe WA chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
Ooh I liked it!' I love how you intruduced Heather ]
| wickedozgirl chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
Omg I was so scared, I totally thought the guy was going to rape her. Until it was bill, of course. And then I thought he was drunk or something lol.
And that's cute, Amanda made a new friend :P
| Broadway Babe WA chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
O.O Update this! NOW. I have to read what's gonna happen!
| wickedozgirl chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Ahhhhhh nooo! Poor Amanda :( and bills mum is a bitch! Maybe she should consider the fact that it was HER son that got Amanda pregnant in the first bloody place!
Please don't let that man rape her or anything...
| wemmawriter chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Nice start! You've got great descriptive writing and this chapter flows really well. Looking forward to chapter two! :)
| feminist-gavroche chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
This is good!
You use description well and it's an interesting story line. I enjoyed the first chapter, I'd like to see what happens next. :)
Told you I'd like it ;)
| wickedozgirl chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Wow Hollie you're a really good writer! This was really good! Is it a oneshot or are you going to write more for it?