Reviews for Begin again
Anita7 chapter 5 . 5/2/2012
Wow. Just wow.

I have waited for this to happen for so long in my mind, and you wrote it prefectly :)

I look forward to see more of your talent ;)

P.S:With the time difference between where you are and France this was actually the first thing i read this morning and it totally made my day, so thank you very much for wrttting this story :)
saii79 chapter 5 . 5/2/2012
What a great day! Sun is shining, only 3 workday at this week, and a new chapter in this amazing story. :)This chapter was adorable. Finally they admited their feelings for each other, a big thank you to Hanna and that Sara chick, she was pretty cool.

The kiss, must tell you it worth the wait, was so cute...Awwww!

Thanks for this beautiful chapter, can't wait what will happen on their date. :)
Anita chapter 5 . 5/2/2012
This is incredible! So much tenderness and awe! These adorable together!

I'd like to see the reaction to all this Spencer)

Thank you for this chapter, and I expect the next one. Please do not make us wait;)
Yana chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Finally! Wow, I did not hope to continue so soon, but I will not complain;)

It was amazing! Still can not bring myself to stop smiling! What are they cute! You are very talented!

Keep up the good work. With bated breath waiting for the continuation.
Artisall chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Perfect yet again. The kiss was lovely, exactly how I expected it. I love that you update so quickly :D please continue to do so, no one will mind. I can't wait to see how their date goes.
PailyFTW chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Love the work you've done with all the characters. I think you've captured the essence of every character wonderfully. Especially love Paige and Spencer. Their jokes are hilarious. Thank you for doing such a great job. Looking forward to more chapters :)
pailyfan chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
I feel bad for not reviewing until now because I've been following from the beginning, guess I was just being lazy. :p But anyway, I just wanted to say that this is easily the best paily fic going right now, so keep up the good work! I love this story! :D
bnmbnmbnmnbm chapter 3 . 5/1/2012
The guy at the party, was a jerk! I was expecting Emily to tell Paige what he said and get beat up by her. lol.

And that was such a scary dream. Sad how Emily she lost two girls that she loved.

Great chapter too.
Anita7 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
Love this chapter,

i wish you were the one writing the Paily storyline on the show

Can't wait to read what is going to happen next ;)
bnmbnmbnmnbm chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Glad Paige is there to comfort Emily and make her feel better.
bnmbnmbnmnbm chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Poor Emily.

Wow, you are a really great writer.

I could never write something like this, I'm more used to writing in scripts.
anonima chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
This story is getting better and better!
saii79 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
God girl, you're teasing us! :D This chapter was amazing again. I loved the paintball battle, all of Em's friends and Paige finally spent time together, and all of them enjoyed it. I liked that they can accept Paige, the whole battle was funny. :)

How you describe Em's and Paige's feelings, is so beautiful, so much in love with each other, love it. :) I patient, ok try to patient, and wait the right time, when they can be finally together.

Thanks for the great writing again, can't wait for the next one. :)
deadgirl101 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
This was amazing and sooo emotional I want them together :D !
Sora Yagami chapter 4 . 5/1/2012
"Em, Paige, are you two on the same team?"

Jajaja okay, good one! That was SO funny! xD!. I just had to mention that ;D!

So... with the rest of the chapter... just kill me already! D:! I'm crying a lot! :'(! I was all smiles and grinning like an idiot because Emily's so cute! she's adorable when she is triying to control herself all the time, it's a little sad how she thinks that Paige deserves better than a broken person like her but... it's still adorable in a way. BUT! then all the good moments go to hell because... damn! there's the almost kiss, the awkward moment and in the car... when all the public and readers are like "Damn! at least Emily got the guts to clear something!" the big downfall comes... really, I SO hate that Sara Girl like you got no idea ._.

Again, it's a little sad how Emily just leave aside her own feelings because she thinks it's for the best... she thinks Paige deserves better and that she lost her chance. Because damn! that's exactly what Paige thinks! And at this rate... they're gonna hurt each other a lot, they both think the other wants to be "just friends" when they both want to be more...

And "just friends" it's just a lot of crap! Come on, anyone that have to use that term obviously like the other person xD.

But whatever, just so you know... this left me with a bittersweet feeling... I don't know If it was such a good idea to see some of Paige POV...I loved to know a little of what the hell is going on in her head but... damn! Now I know for sure that she feels the same and that just make this harder because... I know they like each other but that they're being idiots and I can't do anything to help them! It's frustrating! xD Like I said, I'm crying and my stomach hurts because I'm making a little tantrum or something like that (I know sometimes I'm childish, thank you! xD). But don't worry, I get that they're not just gonna be together right away, that would be kind of boring, you have to make us want it so bad! (Well, I want it so bad... seriously, you're gonna cause me a serious problem with my stomach or something -for the way I'm angry at Emily and Paige for being so... idiots! yeah, that's the word, just face your feelings! xD-) SO bad that you need to have us begging you for it... Then, and just then and after a good storyline and giving that Sara girl a good "Go to hell!" scene, you can write about them being really really together. Not before... SO... yeah, maybe a few chapters or more from here xD.

But just so you know, I really liked the way you wrote Emily here, I like that's she's so sweet that puts aside her feelings -it also infuriates me but don't worry xD- and the way you wrote Paige... a little glance at her head and... damn! things are complicated BUT! please Paige! Don't give up, a Mcullers don't give up so easily! Emily just so sweet and she's so broken right now... If Paige don't take that first step, Emily's not gonna do it, because she just made so many "mistakes" this past days that she's gonna be extra careful about what she says and does around Paige. So yeah, Paige have to see it for herself! She have to see that Emily really loves her and that she's just holding back because she don't want to see Paige get hurt... And Paige have to remember about Emily's nightmare, she can't forget about it! I mean, she don't know what it was about but she have to see the connection!...

I know I'm being a little demanding towards Paige but like I said, I feel that she have to see all this by herself and act on it because Emily's not gonna do it u.u!

Good job incluiding the other girls too! I began to missed them xD! So yeah... I'm gonna go but... damn! I have contradicted feelings... I'm sad because they're in a difficult position and they don't see each other feelings BUT! I also love to read something like this, it hurts but it's interesting...

I'm beggining to think I'm some sort of masochist or something, I read, I cry, I get angry with Emily, Paige and the world and their situation but I'm gonna be here when the next chapter it's uploaded for sure xD!

See ya! Hugs From Mexico!
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