|Reviews for Fate|
| ForeverInHiding chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Certainly have my attention. Please update again very very soon.
| irishnlove2shop chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Very good story, love how he asked to get to know her!
As you said, you could leave it as a O/S, or it is open to go as a multi-chapter fic. If you are up for the challenge, you could go many different ways with this...alternating POVs starting when they wake up...or even jump ahead a little into the future when they are an established couple and about to buy a house together and they can reminise about the beginning of their relationship...with the story moving forward from there...with their careers, future plans, families, etc. Just some things for you to think about. Have confidence in your writing! It is very good...just think about your plot and where you want it to go for the longer chapter fics!
This was a fun read, and I am looking forward to more of your stories! :-)
| beachlovers chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I hope you get reviews! ! Were you nervous writing that lemon? It was the only part I noticed spelling errors and typos.:-) :-)
Go with the story! Add to your summary "lemons" they will read!