|Reviews for Half Homunculi|
| KitsuneFlareFox chapter 1 . 2/6
You are not aloud to stop
| SilverBloodClaw chapter 1 . 1/13
I love your story and the idea of them both as half humonculi.
And the way you wrote really make me want to read more of it.
So please make the nexr chapter!
| Shadow Ackerman chapter 1 . 1/10
Please continue this!
| allie.cat.16503 chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
you have to continue I loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Ooh, this looks really interesting! I'd love to see an update, the other character's reactions will be nice to see.
| DarkTragedy chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
This could get good please update
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
| Mermaid's Magic chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
I have one thing to say "What the holy cheese crackers" When you Updating?
| DaughterofDante chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Dude! Write it or I'll take it and run with it!
| Gift of the Dragons chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
You're gonna continue this, right? Ed's usually made Pride because of Bluebird's Illusions / Illusions of A Bluebird (two different titles for it, sorry) and while Al doesn't strike me as being Greed, I can see why you chose it to be that way. Al's armor isn't so different from Greed's carbon shield, if you think about it in the way you wrote it...
There's three things I absolutely have to ask.
One: did Ed regain his arm? You wrote that it had been transmuted into a spear, but it's not entirely clear afterwards if that was a forceful removal because he regained his flesh arm, or if he somehow extended it and hit the Homunculi with it.
Two: Are the Homunculi still there with them? It never said they left, but it never said they had stuck around, either.
Three: This will be continued, right? It doesn't say hiatus anywhere on your profile, but I still feel that I have reason to fear...
| Rain of the Forest chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
WHOA! So Ed is Pride and Al is Greed...?... now that's messed up...
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I like it! **
| NSAlchemist chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
OMG! This is amazing, though I never really saw Alphonse as Greed. Dunno what I was thinking actually for him, but strangely seems to fit. WRITE MORE. I'm sorry its just sooooo difficult to find stories with good plots like these, you really have to continue :D
| flamesofunknown chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I really like this. I'm interested in where you'll take this story. It would have been a nicer if it was 2k words as a first chapter, as I found things to be a bit rushed and the chapter too fast. Slow thigs down and be a bit more descriptive
Over all, I'm interested in how this will turn out.