Reviews for First Time
MinoAcid chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Wow, Ms. Phoenix sure was portrayed as a total Psycho in this one. How would Keine react, I wonder? Hahaha Anyway, it leaves much to be desired, and makes the reader confused and bewildered instead of being creepy, disgusting and fear-inspiring brutal. I blame the extreme shortness. Still, good for a drabble.