|Reviews for Heart's False Start|
| CarmellaD'Winter chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
Really great. Excellent in fact. Had me wanting to know more. I loved everything and thought it was great. All the emotion was so strong, it was brilliant.
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/23/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
omgggg love u
| jesterjessie chapter 4 . 11/16/2013
I'm so, so glad I found this story again. Still gives me as many chills as it did the first time I read. Truly, one of the best fanfics I think I've ever read.
| DreamsAreMyWords chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Wow, this was amazing! Your writing is spectacular, and this was so, so heartbreaking. Just WOW. WOW. (when it's not 4 in the morning, I will have better words). Great, insanely great, great is not a good enough word, job!
| krazikool04 chapter 5 . 7/10/2013
Words can't even describe how good this story is.
| hawkefan chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
This was a great story )
| fgr chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
and here i was hoping it was going to be like three comes
| Bri chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
Wow, so I just came across this story this morning and I was immediately hooked. The way I read completed fics is usually by reading the last chapter, it's weird but I can't help but know how the fics end before I read them. Anyways, I skimmed through the last chapter and I had no clue what was going on but it seemed really interesting. So I finally finished reading it and all I have to say is, wow that was a beautiful story. It was so heartbreaking and bittersweet, all of the characters had their own hardships and you showed that really well. All the detail was just perfect and I'm an Army veteran myself so I was really happy with the way you described it, most writers don't really know much about military customs and its always been a bit of a pet peeve of mine. But anyways, I really loved this story and quinntana fics this good (and completed) are really hard to come by. The emotions I got from reading this were overwhelming, so give yourself a pat on the back for such great work.
I would hope you wrote a small sequel or an epilogue if anything, but if you don't that's okay.
Thanks for posting such an awesome story, hopefully I'll see more work like this from you.
| Harrybm54 chapter 5 . 6/12/2013
beautiful. Among the very best of fanfiction. Like influence. You touched my heart. And I could not stop reading. So great. So wonderful. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
Sequel sequel sequel!
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
God I want a sequel to this so bad!
| stav jacobi 1986 chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
this is so perfect!
i was crying most of the last parts...
i'm crying now... :'D
wow...this is...just wow!
| joy.rolo chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
thanks so much for writing this story! i love it and such a beautiful and bittersweet ending.
| NayaboobiesabsassRivera chapter 5 . 5/12/2013
"You sent her off to a war already wounded." I absolutely loved Mama Maribel and all that she had to say, finally someone standing up for santana (besides brittany). But anyway, i absolutely loved this and your writing style