Reviews for Target Acquired
Purest of the Hearts chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
Time to awake, Chell. Wheatley, I think you may want to run XD
Purest of the Hearts chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
*stares at screen excitedly* I always like it when people describe the final fight and have Chell hold onto Wheatley :D
Indigo Tantarian chapter 24 . 2/13/2014
That was a nice suspenseful beginning! I really enjoy the parts with Blue and Orange, especially the bird scene. I'm glad they're going to find Chell and Wheatley!
...I'm also glad you continued this! Keep it up!
BabyCharmander chapter 24 . 2/12/2014
ohmygosh NEW CHAPTER I am so excited! It’s been a while so I had to skim over parts of the last chapter to remind myself where in the story we were.

Oh, it’s Chell! Still sleeping… Oh gosh I love these descriptions of the facility, with the panels talking and the turrets singing to each other.

…DANG, she’s been asleep for over three days? It makes sense given how injured she was, but still…! Poor Chell. …Agh, and poor Wheatley… I hope she’ll get to see him again…!

It’s so cool to see GLaDOS interacting with Chell again! For a second I was wondering why she was going through the end dialogue, but of course, that exchange at the end of the game didn’t happen in the TA universe! So it’s cool to see that you still put it to use. :D

Urgh I’m feeling the same sense of foreboding as Chell here… What is GLaDOS—wh—LOVE?! ...Yeah, she would think that, wouldn’t she? Sa;ldfj;ladsj SHUT UP GLaDOS, AIs can feel love!

“She had to believe, that if he was ever given a second chance to do it all over again and be plugged back into Her body, that he wouldn’t sell her out for science and try to murder her.” But then, given that dream Wheatley had… D:

Oh gosh I hope they don’t kill Carrie aaaaaaaa D%;;; Also I’m getting the feeling that GLaDOS is not being sincere about letting Chell go, but I guess we’ll see…

…Okay I have to admit the “you’re fired” thing made me laugh. XD;


Aaaa I keep forgetting to write in this review because I’m so wrapped up in this fic. XD; I love how you write both of the co-op bots! Oh man though I’m nervous right along with both of them. Xx;

…Wait, is that Orion?! Okay, so I guess GLaDOS is going to find the eggs—OR NOT. WHAT?! I… I was not expecting that…!

The ending of this chapter was really cute but at the same time I am wondering WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO GLADOS AND WHY DID THE LIGHTS GO OFF AAAAAAAA

This chapter was awesome and totally worth the wait but now I am going to go crazy wondering what happened with GLaDOS! _ ;
Jaywings chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
Yay! An update! And Chell's finally awake! :D This was a really good chapter :) I love how you use lines from the DLC thing. And, of course, the bird. Ehehe :)
TJLewis chapter 23 . 11/2/2013
please continue this it is epic
YamYam chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Ugh, I finally found it. I've been searching for this story because once upon a time I read this before and it left and impression on me and I wanted to reread it again and im so happy that i found it. thats all i wanted to say.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 23 . 10/7/2013
I love Wheatley's dream! You do his dialogue (or, let's face it, monologue!) very well. ...And Wheatley still doesn't understand Chell very well at all!
GLaDOS's commentary is excellent.
Blue and Orange are lots of fun together! And I like how GLaDOS talk to them, too. She won't admit it, but she's fond of them! :)
BabyCharmander chapter 23 . 10/2/2013
Okay time to read new TA chapter! I AM EXCITE.

Hmm, were the markings there supposed to be underneath the numbers?

D’aww, did they fist-bump? Oh man, things are getting bad though. D%;; Even GLaDOS seems scared… I mean, I know this happens in the game too, but in the context of what’s going on in this fic… *shudder*

Oh no, is Wheatley going to have a nightmare…? D: Wait, he’s dreaming about being a core again, isn’t he? Oh gosh what’s poking at him? …A blackbird? Orion? And… Chell! I feel kinda happy that he gets to see her, even though this is only a dream… Aaaaa no Wheatley this is a dream, even if you tell her now, it won’t work… D:

Turn yourself—FFFF WHEATLEY NO THAT IS NOT A BETTER OPTION. Are you forgetting that GLaDOS tried to get Chell to KILL you?! And—wait—put him back on… Wheatley why would you say that adlsjf;lasjd no that is not the better option aaaaaa you idiot. …Well trying to help her through the nanobots is slightly better but geez. …oh crap, dream!Chell is mad, crap… oh crap she’s going to drop him through one of the holes in the floor, isn’t she. Or off the catwalk. Oh crap. ohcrapohcrapohcrapnononoNONONONO

…“definite shade of clear,” pfff.

Oh, is he in a testing uniform now? I thought he put it on himself in an earlier chapter… I remember GLaDOS commented on how ridiculous it was that he was having trouble dressing himself. Hehe, he can’t resist the adrenal vapor, though—that stuff sounds awful.

HAH, I like how he ties the upper part of his jumpsuit around his waist like Chell does! Maybe trying to be like Chell will help him. %D

Once again, I really like how you write Blue and Orange. Also how they can read numbers, but not letters… hmm, wonder what that picture is of, though. Hehe, I like the way they squabble with each other. …Hrm, did they find a core? Or one of their replacement frames?

Awww, and they’re holding hands…

…Urgh I hope that didn’t remind Blue of that time. D: Poor guy…

This was a good chapter! I love seeing stuff from the co-op bots, and I’m looking forward to seeing more from them.
Silverstreams chapter 23 . 10/1/2013
I am so glad that you send me your TA playlist. It's really helpful to know these songs going into the chapter :3

Ah I'm excited to see Blue and Orange. I also really love how you typed up the warning sign at the beginning of the test—I can almost hear the panel flicker to life when I look at that. And aw, I'm worried about the facility and what might happen.

I like how Wheatley's section here begins with a lot of longer, rambling sentences. Even when you're narrating for him, it still has that Wheatley feel to it. But oh no, this doesn't bode well for Wheatley. A nightmare is almost inevitable now.

Ooh, I like this description of the relaxation pod. I also like how you can tell the exact moment Wheatley starts dreaming through those italics. Mmmm I love your description of sunlight. And ah, that must be disorienting for him to think that he's a core again just after he got used to his body. Gah a bird. That would be a terrible thing to show up in his nightmare considering his fear of birds. I could see how scary they would be to robots. I also like how you describe Chell's eyebrows in this. Your description of overgrown Aperture is beaaautiful, and I love this sort of flashback to earlier in the fic, back when things were still going their way…

The thing about this nightmare is that, for the most part, it seems like a nice and calm dream. And gah, I can't blame either one of them for reacting the way they did. Wheatley really is trying to do the best thing and save them that pain, but gaaaah. I can't even imagine would it would be like for Chell to turn herself in. Even thinking about it makes my stomach do a thing. He really wants to change what happens, but honestly I don't think that Chell would have made any other choice. I can't see her ever giving up her shot at freedom, no matter how slim that chance might be, and that's something you've communicated perfectly with this dream.

Gah Chell is still rather scary in this, especially in the way that she grabs Wheatley's handles. (And aaah being so close to online test chambers makes me nervous even knowing this is a dream.) The descriptions here are so lovely, and I especially LOVE that dark smile of Chell's. Gosh poor Wheatley though.

Ooh I like your description of the smell of adrenal vapor, and how you include it in this :3 It seems to be an excellent motivator for Wheatley. Gah, when he talks about how he wishes he was more like Chell it breaks my heart. Wheatleeeey.

Pffft his reaction to the jumpsuit is funny. (And I like that GLaDOS asked him how he was doing. He's right. It was a strange yet compassionate question from her.) And Wheatley nooo you can't really resist the adrenal vapor.

I'm with Wheatley, though. I wonder what Chell's reaction to him will be, too. And heh cute that he pulled down his jumpsuit like Chell. What a good team they make.

Yaaaaay Blue and Orange again! These two are so adorable aaah. And I can't get over how PERFECTLY WELL these art therapy lines fit in aaaah.

I'm assuming that the core they found is Wheatley, considering it didn't respond to them and didn't seemed to be powered on anyways. Oh nooo too cute. Cute robots doing cute things aaah. And awww I'm so glad that Orange wants to reunite them.

Those lines are TOO PERFECT. And gaaaaah can't wait for more! Excellent chapter :3
Commander Allie chapter 23 . 10/1/2013
Oooh, I wonder who is messing with her system...I bet Wheatley is the one recovering and Chell is probably doing something to Her.
Jaywings chapter 23 . 9/30/2013
Awww! I almost cried during Wheatley's dream when Chell pushed him off the railing... "grab me!" nOOOO

Anyway, this is another awesome chapter. You write the co-op bots adorably :)
Commander Allie chapter 22 . 9/10/2013
Aww poor Wheatley is confused! :( Good luck in the Testing buddy! I hope Chell is ok.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
I think Wheatley's very believable in his human body, trying to figure it out and not being terribly successful for a while. I like how proud he is of himself for walking and such, though!
I also like his nostalgia about the management rail.
I REALLY love it when he discovers his beard bits and thinks it's moss or mold.
Nice job, as usual!
pandaheadpancake chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
this was well worth waiting for, I love this story so much and with this new chapter it really refreshes my memory of how much i love this story. oh also i love the way you describe wheatleyy and his luscious eyes hehe
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