Reviews for Target Acquired
Indigo Tantarian chapter 15 . 1/27/2013
Oh no, awful, terrible things... :(
Indigo Tantarian chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
Excellent, the mantis men!
I love Cave Johnson.
And I hope Chell and Wheatley find each other soon. I miss their dynamic.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 13 . 1/27/2013
Carrie's an interesting addition! I like how she works.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 12 . 1/27/2013
That gel sounds like nasty stuff. Ha, perfect for toothpaste... I love the dynamic between Cave and Caroline in the messages.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 11 . 1/27/2013
Aaaaahhhh, so much tension, and then I don't think I've ever read a more exciting sequence of logging in and inputting a command. :)
Indigo Tantarian chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
This chapter was wonderful and sweet, and I loved it.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
I'm glad they're getting along better... though still not best friends, which is also good at this point.
I like how you wrote the action sequence of the jump!
Indigo Tantarian chapter 7 . 1/27/2013
Ohh, I loved the interaction with the camera.
Maybe Chell can get some rest, and possibly find some food now!
Indigo Tantarian chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
I like that Chell's SLOWLY starting to tolerate Wheatley more. The pacing is excellent.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
Your characterizations and dialogue are PERFECT! Nice job.
Indigo Tantarian chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
I love your characterization of Wheatley. Very realistic.
...Also, the 'any key.' Heehee...
Indigo Tantarian chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This is excellent! The transitions between Chell and Doug's points of view are very smooth. On to the next chapter!
Princess of Rose chapter 18 . 1/26/2013
I did enjoy P-Body's POV a lot! It was interesting to see into the head of a non-human character (your Wheatley comes off as very human, which is a good thing), and to see how she perceives emotions, GLaDOS, and the outside world. I hope you do more with the robots in later chapters.
And Chell. You always make me worry about Chell.
LadyCha0s chapter 18 . 1/26/2013
Ratkinzluver33 chapter 18 . 1/25/2013
It's really interesting to see this in P-Body's POV! I really liked this chapter _. Keep up the good work!
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