Brilliant
An waking up
Thank you for sharing

NIICCEE JON ALLIE! For making them realize what they been missing all along that was right under there thier nose the whole time! -thumbs up-

This Hobbes isn't a reference to the one who wrote "The Leviathan", is it?

Interesting take on HHr as a pairing from little Miss Allie's POV; she took the words right outta my mouth! :-D

OHhhh shucks really that was cute how the lill girl made a fit about it LOL

I freaking love Allie. She was like, drop the mike and walk, the hell off.

PERFECT! Now, if only we could get Rollins to read this:)

Aww... cute! Glad the first year Hufflepuff could open their eyes to what was under their noses the whole time.

Well done!

-Shani :)

You get it. You so totally get it. And I'm speechless.

Wow. That was literally my favorite harry and hermione story I have ever read. Please don't take this lightly. I truly mean it... This is very well done. So impressed!

Goodness.

That was very powerful and evocative. I'm still not certain if Ms Alethea is a real student or if there's a missing line " ... and as she passed out of sight around the corner, the polyjuice faded and Luna smiled to herself, very satisfied at a job well done." but that's certainly a moment that was needed for a general wake up call.

Very well done, and thanks for sharing this glimpse of harmony.

apAidan

Oh. My. Godric.

I love this, I love this, I love Allie.
Oh, jesus.

where is the second part of this story

This was pretty good! Congratulations!

The author JKR in your story is a lot more perceptive than the real one. The real one never realized that she had written an romance between Harry and Hermoine and instead was under the delusional impression that Ron was a good match for Hermoine (poor girl).

Thanks for writing,

Ron