|Reviews for Disillusioned|
| Aronim chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Good read here. Quite poignant and the scene with the crew reminiscing is exactly the right blend of sad and funny. And the last part, with Garrus just talking to the empty room is good too.
Only thing I have to criticise is the use of parenthesis', because I don't think they're used very well or at all necessary in this fic. But that's a pet peeve of mine.
| MLGumm chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Garrus with a book deal? I'd read it for the snarkiness alone.
Good work on your story.
| OrderlyAnarchist chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I really loved this. You made something great out of the mess that was ME3's ending without changing a damn thing. I commend you for that. The characterization was good, the dialogue memorable, and it seemed neuter rushed nor dragged. I swear I nearly cried in that first scene with Tali, and that hasn't happened since I heard Dream Theater's The Best of Times.
A great effort, and a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing.
| exiled-druid chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
that was amusing.