|Reviews for The Humans Strike Back|
| antheunis011 chapter 8 . 1/22
oh man, i love reading this story, i laugh at your puns consantly. My fav's right now are ''In rusia i kill bears 3 times your size'', the report for that in the following chapters, live ammo for tsume's shadow guards, and the efectionate teenage vampires
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
This story is pure fucking GOLD! The underdogs become some of the most dangerous sons of bitches in the multiverse, and humans, all 7 billion of them, have the potential to kick ASS! WOOP! Thank you :D
| Illuviar chapter 38 . 8/23/2013
It was a great story!:D
| Illuviar chapter 17 . 8/23/2013
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| Illuviar chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Great story so far!
| Piterio chapter 10 . 8/14/2013
You know while all this augmented seems very, you seems to greatly understatement the power of supernatural. Shinigami and Hollow in fact the most. I mean while low level is weak Vaste Lorde and Captains not something to scoff at.
| Onsholo chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
When i saw Yuri i though you were talking about Yuri from Company of Heroes 2. :P
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
WTF is this?
| iota0000 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
This just seems like a gigantic human-perspective fix-fic, with that entire faction having inexplicably obtained MarySue-level superiority, pretty much overriding all canon spiritual properties, as far as Bleach is concerned (not a big RV fan, so can't much comment there). Thanks, but I'll pass.
| animelovercamcam chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
In Rosario Vampire Dracula's name is alucard
| snickerslv100 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
While this is an interesting premise I do hope there aren't large blocks of text like that throughout the whole story.
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/23/2013
B damit B. I dont want to see another umaity wipes everyone out out of blind hatred. *cough* 40K *cough*.
| noctisxx13 chapter 37 . 5/14/2013
I think you have a pretty cool story here, but there were some things that didn't seem right.
1. You talked about the first youki human war. I didn't even think there was a war to begin with. I mean there could have been a few battles here and there, but I don't remember a talk of an all out war. I also want to say that if there was a war, isn't it also possible that there were some good youki that fought for the humans.
I just think that without guns, the humans wouldn't have stood a chance. With creatures like the phoenix being able to blow down mountains by just flapping it wings, vamps and wolves moving far faster and hitting harder than everything, and succubus being able to cast illusions and charm people, I would think they could inflict massive casualties among humans. And when you add the fact that most youki can dodge bullets as well as take a great amount of damage and recover very quickly, I doubt arrows and swords would be able to hurt one of them or even hit them at all.
2. You had said that in a fight only skill matters, but then you make the augments have abilities that far outclass anything the youki were able to put out. The test fight proved this. A team of 4 spec-ops, who were most likely just as skilled as the augments, weren't even able to keep up with them. I think that proved that while skill is important, having speed, strength, and other things helps just as much.
3. As for bleach, the main issues were in the part where they went to the SS. I'm pretty sure that normal matter isn't able to be in the SS, because I think that when they went to rescue Rukia, Urahara had to do something to the group that would allow them to pass. I could be very wrong though.
4. The last thing was the speed of the augments. At first you say they can move at 80 mph, but then you say that they're moving at the same speed as shunpo, which was supersonic speeds. I just want to know if 80 mph is like their base speed or if I've got it completely wrong.
Other than that I think you do raise some good points. Plus you have some great fights. Nothing long and drawn out, nor the stupid crap like telling each other about their powers, having conversations during fights, or always going for one on one fights. Keep up the good work.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
sure exist in a testing fase, but exist in a mass produced ready for war faze? the fuck?
and what makes you think the things would WORK on something if it didn't have freaking resitu to back it? and pressurize shit? how the fuck would that protect against resitu at all? it wouldent do jack shit!
super robats that are ready to fight?
you have a nice idea but it is so far but seriously wha twith this idea that bullets would do anything against a hollow?
im disappointed really. your not factioruing in thenon human element either, your treating them just like fancy humans that can do odd shit.
and to think that this organization would get enough money to do this... its sad
I like how you set it up though. even though you don't take in how much work int akes for placement to trap people like the sound things? why wouldent it just move out of the way befre it really gets fucked up? the hell?