|Reviews for What You're Falling On|
| c.mary.c chapter 7 . 7/3
I really, really enjoyed reading this! You've crafted an intriguing, original, and consise story that kept me glued from start to finish. I love stories that have an action/adventure-government agency angle with heaps of romance mixed in, and they are so difficult to find on especially ones as well-constructed as this one.
I found Inuyasha and Kagome to be very true to character and their relationship developed at a realistic and believable pace, and I actually love the way you ended it -you closed the book on your story but still left an opening for a sequel of you ever want one. That's the great thing about creating your own universe like you did here; there are endless possibilities for companion stories.
I found myself desperately wanting to read fics that had qualities like this one, but I couldn't find any for the longest time so I wound up writing one that turned out to be something I'm really proud of, and I think you would enjoy it. It's called Perfect Blood, and it's a Fullmetal Alchemist fic but it's so loosely tied to the original canon that you don't need to know anything about Fullmetal Alchemist to enjoy it. It's a mystery/thriller that's been dipped in ultra-romantic chocoately goodness, it's got psycho stalkers and hot dangerous men and military corruption and sex scandals, so all the good stuff haha.
Anyway your story is awesome and I figured if you're anything like me (always looking for these kind of fics) then maybe you'd enjoy mine.
Thanks for a great fic Witchy! It got me through a really long road trip with ease :)
| Kuddle.Cakes chapter 7 . 3/24
| LovelyLadyMindings chapter 7 . 1/25
This is just something else! Wow! Wonderful, wonderful story! Your Inuyasha and Kagome were so great! Despite the differences in situation (although when you get past the surfaces, the core is still the same: Inuyasha and Kagome working together against Naraku to get the jewel), the two characters behave remarkably like their tv counterparts. Although I'd warrant your Kagome is much more mature (perhaps due to her aging up in this). Same with Inuyasha.
But seriously, wonderful story! Couldn't stop reading! Although I do wish you had continued and told us their upcoming adventures (Kagome rekindling her friendship with Miroku/Sango, the exact usage of the jewel, etc). That said, still a wonderful story!
Great job! :)
| bluepianos chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
Hi! I'm late to the party but I've just found this and one chapter in - I'm already hooked! I thought it was pretty funny that Kaede with her one eye is just like Nick Fury with his one eye and they're both directors of secret organizations that fight supernatural forces to save the planet. Fabulous.
I'm DIGGING the tension between Kagome and Inuyasha right now - you play off Inuyasha's deep-rooted issues really well, made him real brash and reckless which is just the way I like him lolol, but you've also got something deeper going on with Kagome, too, I'm sensing layers of regret, shame, and a dark past to her too (oOOoooOoh la la) and I absolutely dig that, too.
I have an exam to study for but one more chapter before hitting the books can't hurt right?
| Closet lover chapter 7 . 5/1/2015
It's doesn't happen often, well not to me, that I come across a fanfic as good as this that I haven't seen before. Like I thought I read all the great inuyasha fics, but wow have I missed one. This was fantastic!
| Marie Allen chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
AH! I LOVED this! I was a little nervous at first, thinking that the romance was going to be really rushed, but then I realized they were just caring about each other (phew!) and then it progressed from there. Good job handling that!
Is there going to be a sequel? Do they get sent to the past and have to battle Naraku there? Is the jewel not real?
| HO0T HO0T chapter 4 . 12/9/2014
Are they hiding an army on the other side of the well?
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
So what Kagome fis falling on is Inuyasha's dick.
...Pardon my poor attempt at humor. It's like 2 in the morning.
I think I forgot to mention two things in my previous review. First of al- Koga as a rapist?! Damn, the last time I read something like that was in Heart's Landfill, this 66-chapter-story-still-incomplete helluva dark fic. Second of all, I hope Sesshomaru won't try to kill Inuyasha again because the Tenseiga only works once, haha.
Aaaaand as for this seventh chapter...
It's a FUCK YEAH to every little thing. I don't mind the ending at all. I like this kind of ending, it's less "and they lived happily ever after" than what it could have been and it's a wise decision you made because I can't see any fairytale ending when they were being tortured in the previous chapter. So it's as perfect as the ending of HTKM.
AND THE SEX. Hubby, quit your job and write porn. I mean it. You'd be so rich you'd feed your fiancé caviar every morning. And I'd translate your works in French and Italian so that you'd be popular overseas, in countries where people are too stupid to learn English.
Really, I see why this story is one of your favorites. I wonder if Happiness is your other favorite.
Ah. And you say All but just forgotten is kind of like this story? WRITE IT so I can squeal all over the place.
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
Okay, remember when I fell in love with that other chapter? Well, I so in love with this one now. Seriously, not I have a weird torture fetish but... Wow. The death threat caused them to actually bond, spill the truth about their ghosts aaaaaaaaand fall even more in love - I'd ask, "how is that possible?" But I don't want people to torture me to find out.
Honestly, I'd spend 10,000 characters telling you how impressive the torture techniques were given the demons involved and the AU setting but then somebody would check me in a loony bin.
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 5 . 10/30/2014
How do you manage to do that?
I know when shit is going to hit the fan yet when it does I'm like, "No way, whyyyyyyyyyy?!"
Anyhoo, I like how Kagome is working hard to fight her attraction to Inuyasha. She sure has the tendency to avoid her personal issues, what with refusing to speak with Sango and Miroku, not realizing that Inuyasha has got it bad - he went to retrieve her earring, hahah.
I hope she won't need another torture session to get real.
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 4 . 10/30/2014
I am in love. With you, hubby, of course, but also with this chapter. Inuyasha's jealousy made up for the fact that Sesshomaru got to play with his sword and walk away as if killing people and bringing them back to life is effin' normal. I almost can't belive that Inuyasha stayed up in the tree and let that Moryomaru talk dirty to Kagome, hahaha. Let's be proud.
I won't ask questions about Miroku and the well as I'm sure you wrote the answers in the following chapters. :-)
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 3 . 10/30/2014
Wow, I wasn't sure you'd add a Sesshomaru scene and I sure as hell didn't imagine that he'd be the asswipe he was at the beginning of the series. And speaking of aggravating people, Kaede is the kind of director that reminds me of stupid I-stay-in-my-office-but-get-to-chastise-all-of-you high school principal. Sesshomaru shouldn't get away with this.
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 2 . 10/30/2014
My, my, my, this gets better way fast and no, I'm not complaining. Is it just me or Inuyasha knows how to ignite sexual tension in the worst possible way? First, Kagome's got blood all over her face; then he's practicing saying her name and finally, he wants to see her naked before dinner. Knowing what you want is great and all but can we say overconfident much?
Damn, and this is just chapter 2. Well, I'm off to get my fix of unresolved sexual tension.
| Kinky-Hoe chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Well, what a first chapter. I'm definitely going to enjoy this one-well, your works always amazed me so I don't think I could ever pass when you publish a story.
I like how Kaede made Inuyasha and Kagome a team, just like in the series. This otherworld isn't too different from the canon universe when it comes to heroes and antagonists. Kagome is a lot more confident and wiser, which is perfect since Inuyasha is still acting like a brat in need of attention, haha. Kagome as the boss is new to me. Hmm.
Given the warnings, I can't wait to read more but ah, I need to sleep.
| jessi chapter 7 . 9/16/2014
Great story, I really liked it!