|Reviews for Star Crossed Lovers|
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/12/2014
i just found this story and its pretty interesting, good job, update soon
| MyCookieByrd chapter 14 . 8/11/2014
I loved this so much! Please continue this to the end. I thought it was so beautiful and loving! I just loves it so much! _•_•_•_•_
| MyCookieByrd chapter 6 . 8/11/2014
I'm going to continue this story but I think it is turning out brilliant! I love every detail so far and I haven't met Logan yet. This is pure genius and yes, I thought at the very very beginning of the story it was a little cheesy and cliché for vampires and angels but I'm not one to talk. I'm a demonized alien who loves almost everything SUPERNATURAL (including the show... :)! ) (Just not horror movies.. No.)
I'm going to finish the story and I will probably love all of the rest that you have written for the forbidden love story between two souls... Ok now I'm the cheesy and Cliché one here! _
| Becca Korklan chapter 14 . 8/10/2014
Poor baby Carlos. Can't deal with that man. Jett makes me want to throw puppies at small children, like you don't even know. Kendall needs to kill the SOB or I will, end of story. Super job. Only uh, three typos... ;)
| annabellex2 chapter 14 . 8/10/2014
So happy to see an update! Poor Los, Kendall should have stayed with him. Hopefully Jett will not get the full powers & Kendall can really kick his ass! Update when you can. :)
| alex.monasterio.948 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
You know girl you have talent and i love your stories and i know you're busy but please try to finish your stories or at least this one.
Hope you won't get mad thanks for reading it
| Xyz chapter 13 . 5/9/2014
165 reviews next chapters please
| Kenlos4ever chapter 13 . 5/9/2014
Chapter 14 please i have to know how the story continues and how it ends
| Xxxxxxxx chapter 13 . 5/9/2014
| Fizzy Bow chapter 13 . 1/16/2014
They need to kiss and have make up sex now! This is not cool. Why is Kendall being a pighead. Carlos holding back his feelings is understable. If i were kidnapped and fell in love with my captor; i would be very low key about the way I show i care about him. Plus my poor baby angel is just so confused and upset. Kendall better get it together or craps going to hit the fan.
Love the story, i read this story a very long time ago before I had a FF acount. I commented but as a guest. i couldnt find it for a long time. but then i found it resently and i have an account now. So i fav'ed it. yay! i do love a good kenlos or jarlos drama romance (mostly Jarlos). Please update.
| Becca Korklan chapter 13 . 11/23/2013
Damn. Why is Logan not a mermaid. I just wanted him to forever be in that bathtub man. Or like get that call from Carlos and then crawl to him. Idk man Logan as a mermaid entertains me. He'd be a fattie okay .
| IcyKenlos chapter 13 . 11/13/2013
The chapter was perfect like always!
Even if it was "filler" I love it. I'm glad Logan made an "appearance" and it makes me wonder if there's going to be Jagan in the future but for now I just focus on how adorable Kendall and Carlos are. No matter how annoyed they get at each other, they can't stay mad for long. Kendall is so falling head over hills for Carlos and I can't wait for the two to take another step in their relationship.
Update soon! Because I can't wait!
| Chey21 chapter 13 . 11/11/2013
Love it !
I Cant wait to read That big idea ;)
| MisreadSoul chapter 13 . 11/10/2013
Did I forget to mention that James is a complete sweetheart? Well he is... I wonder why he's still single... or, erm... IF he's single. Because if he is then that's a shame... :/
Ahem, as for Kendall and Carlos... idk. I'm just waiting for them to stop 'fighting' or whatever it is they're doing. Or for Jett to walk into the sun... whichever comes first...
| LoveSparkle chapter 13 . 11/9/2013
Awww poor Logie :(
Ooooh imagine Logan uses someway or another to find Carlos and tries to rescue him but James finds him first and they bond or something like Kendall and Carlos!