Reviews for Hambo and Bonnibel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Billy being the Father of all those people... Makes a ton of sense, to be completey honest. Wow. So basically you just made every pairing in AT incest. Congrats, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finn is a bad- $$ he got half human half monster kids not only that they could end up being mr for inbreeding |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just fixed some minor grammatical errors. But other than that, I'm rather happy with how much I was able to wedge into such a short story. (Look for foreshadowing and mulch-generational trends, along with Finn's stealth insult towards PB. (If she was Jake's sister then she would be a what?)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finn really gets around! Honestly, though, it seems totally in-character for him to be clueless about it like that. And curiously enough, you hit on all my big ships for Finn: Finn and Susan Strong, Finn and Bubblegum and espicially Finn and Marceline. (HOW I LOVE FINNCELINE.) The transition is a bit confusing, as I'm not sure what's happening after Joshua (I think) shows up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol looks like finn's been busy... :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol now this is some interesting reading. |