Another great story, brilliantly written.
Well, I needn't guess how your writing's progressed over the years after reading that. Really matured from such a brilliant starting position. Glad I'm justified in making you a rare favourite author of mine.

SPOILER: I was so careful not to glance down and read what Draco saw - I should have known you're cleverer than that. The imagination is so much more powerful than being given a 'fact'. Great twist to put it back to your readers and get them wanting more.

sua nau jolly good show good to read and fun to read

A great story, Very well written.

Well, what did he see? Tell me, tell me, tell me! :D