Reviews for Ravenstar's Story
WyldClaw chapter 67 . 2/20
love rabbitleap and brackenheart's names
RobinfeatherMossfall chapter 91 . 8/24/2013
91 chapters. Yowza. O.o
xXStars of FireXx chapter 91 . 7/28/2013
write the sequel but make sure you are careful of what you write there are many mistakes in this that will lead to confusion but totally go for writing a sequel
xXStars of FireXx chapter 84 . 7/28/2013
airpaw and bramblepaw already recieved their warrior names... why are they getting another?
xXStars of FireXx chapter 82 . 7/28/2013
yes you need to fix that i know this story is complete but its still going to cause confusion
xXStars of FireXx chapter 81 . 7/28/2013
um thats her seond life she lost her first life against the badger... you might want to fix that...
xXStars of FireXx chapter 55 . 7/28/2013
wait wut... ok well oh well i never like him in the first place...
xXStars of FireXx chapter 49 . 7/28/2013
REDKIT! my forum name is red/paw/moon/cloud
xXStars of FireXx chapter 41 . 7/28/2013
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW SHE WOULD GO TO JOIN THE CLANS!
xXStars of FireXx chapter 22 . 7/28/2013
id have thought millie would be born again into one of the kits... unless she was... O.O
xXStars of FireXx chapter 17 . 7/28/2013
uh oh... *smirk* what is it with forbidden meetings and love? oh well it adds to excitement (sorry i like to review i will try to keep it at minimum though)
xXStars of FireXx chapter 15 . 7/28/2013
this is incredibly good to bad for snowbird though...
xXStars of FireXx chapter 12 . 7/28/2013
you made the mentors confusing who is sparrowpaw's mentor? brackenfur or sandstorm?
Scourge627 chapter 91 . 6/17/2013
BEST STORY EVER!
Scourge627 chapter 81 . 6/17/2013
she already lost her first life and rowanstar/claw was killed by the roughs
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