|Reviews for The Ghost of a Chance|
| Linda Miller chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Nice character building, I think I have a little fan crush on the two protagonists. Good tension between a somewhat mysterious and threatening "other" and the main characters. Masterful building of anticipation to the climax. I couldn't stop reading.
| GhostDog401 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
I loved this :D very well written
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I love this. Would enjoy seeing more like it from you. Great h/c!
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
lol sweet ending :)
| ferryboat George chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Yeah! That is totally what I wanted, I love how you managed to hide what happened to him with the boards snapping back into place after dropping him through, brilliant. I love Neal waking up in the hospital and asking if he's dead :)
| msdarque chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Oh poor Neal... having such an unfortunate accident.
But yay, Peter never gave up and found him. :)
Wonderful story. Congrats and kudos!
| pechika chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Lovely h/C story. Glad Peter found Neal in time.
| EveBB chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This was excellent. You did a great job of setting the scene and the reactions of everyone really fit. I would have liked you to explore some more of the secondary characters both during the time Neal was missing and when he was found again. I loved what you did with Peter's thoughts and dialogue and I'm sure you would have done a great job with the other characters too. I hope you consider expanding the story.