Reviews for Seeds of Lemons
Guest chapter 17 . 4/28
Can u pls continue its been nearly a year now pls
The madman writer chapter 17 . 3/17
Ino please lemon God let it be ino to win I feel like whoever gets the chapter and who has to watch they're both going to get off on it but I want ino to win cause she's my favorite. Praise be to lemons!
JoNEdmunds chapter 2 . 3/6
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE GAY PORN, i wanna read about a guy getting pounded in the ass with a 17x4 dildo without lube or foreplay, i have this done to me regularly
JonEdmunds chapter 1 . 3/6
Where is the porn, the tentacles, the anal pouning on the guy from the girl with the huge strapon
Guest chapter 17 . 2/8
It should be ino
Kryptikk chapter 1 . 1/27
10/10 would lemon again.
BeautifulLotus chapter 17 . 1/2
i want more
Shawn007 chapter 17 . 12/30/2014
Sick chapter love the way you try and keep to the original cartoon I vote Sakura!
TheSkullface95 chapter 17 . 12/6/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE
Omega0117 chapter 17 . 11/24/2014
I'm wondering when is the next chapters going to come out.
Invisible chapter 17 . 10/28/2014
Please continue its just so interestingly fascinating
broswagg chapter 17 . 10/28/2014
Ino
Sterben-Salamander chapter 17 . 10/23/2014
Love the story
Cuddly Cat chapter 17 . 10/16/2014
The whole thing with Kakashi telling Sasuke to not use his sharingan in order to have the element of surprise is just stupid on his part. I mean he is Sasuke Uchiha of the renowned Uchiha clan, which are known to posses the sharingan, so his enemies have to be cautious of him having it. And even if he were to count on the fact that they might not know he possess it yet, he already has displayed it several times during the exams. (ex. fight with Lee, and most likely during fight with Orochimaru and first exam written test to copy answers.)

As for Kin, I am kinda disappointed that you seem set on pairing her up with Sasuke, I really wanted to see her end up with Naruto, and Karin with Sasuke, but that might be difficult with her dead and all.

Overall the story is straight forward in its premise, lemons lots of them. Some of the things shown are clever though, and the fact that you have changed the plotline in order to change Sasuke is interesting, since you are not really putting him out of character completely, but developing him differently through what happens in the story itself.(ex. not getting the cursed seal yet)
The madman writer chapter 10 . 10/15/2014
Wow this is so fucking awsome.

I'm now a believer praise the lemon god!
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