Reviews for One Hot Afternoon
Shall-No-Longer-Write chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
I love the way that it's written. Great plot!
sorry not saying chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I guess Sasori went all out when he built his puppet body... Not to be sarcastic, but it makes me wonder how he would manage that... I guess the puppet master could pull it off if he wanted to... XD

I'm glad you didn't make Deidara into one of those timid and shy little virgin ukes, he's definitely not one of those! Great job!
APanime101 chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Love it
Grey Matters chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I don't know why I like this story so much. Mabey I'm a sadist. Keep it up!
riptocs chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
cute I like it but it could use a little more details
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
They suddenly became lovers OWO
DarkAngelHeart chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Great story! I loved it! I just have one question, what does "Danna" mean?
S-AcidRain chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I like it, it's preatty good!

the only thing that I have to say to you is when you are writing a lemon, work on the details, they are very important - little actions like kisses, teases or idk... Stuff that the characters say/whisper can make everything more intresting-