Reviews for New York Minute
caroline chapter 4 . 12/24/2014
it is too short
Peanut chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
I liked the plot
Katerina chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
5 Chapter 5
Once kevin and melanie were back in the rooms of the hotel but one thing kevin had no idea to tell his bestfriend
that he was in love with her but hes also got bigger problems in his mind was harrys voice telling him that he and his partner marve will break out of prison and come back and capture his girlfriend so what can kevin do? can he protect and love melanie will soon find out.
NameKaterina chapter 4 . 4/2/2013
And one more thing though when kevin and his best friend melanie hugged each other but there was a bit of a problem after harry and marve have been taken to jail and harry shouted from the police car too
kevin that him and his accomplice will be back to capture his girlfriend melanie.
fanfictioncollection2013 chapter 4 . 4/24/2012
This was a nice surprise ending, catching them with the help of snowballs- very different to the very dangerous traps Kevin set in HA2, a nice short story and a very happy ending for Kevin and Mel!

Well done, it was a very different way to get the Wet Bandits caught.
fanfictioncollection2013 chapter 3 . 4/20/2012
Interesting story, especially as it's told from your OC's point of view, and your OC is very well written too - she has a personality that rather matches Kevin's quite well. Good story.
fanfictioncollection2013 chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This story is off to a good start! I'm looking forward to reading about Kevin's encounter with Harry and Marv from Melanie's point of view, she seems like quite an interesting character,too.