Reviews for Dog's Death
lillabear489 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This was great! You could really put yourself in Rains shoes
general zargon chapter 8 . 2/4/2013
You are very welcome! I enjoyed this story, and I was wondering what name you were planning on re-uploading it under? I hope you decide to write more for this fandom when time allows you! :)
general zargon chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Aw, you're welcome! I'm glad that you found my reviews helpful, and I have to say that I enjoyed this epilogue. :) This has been a good story, and I love how you wrote Rain's personality! I hope that you decide to write more for this fandom, so please keep up the good work! .
general zargon chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
Watching more Disney movies, always a good decision. :) So, Mana's mom was immune to the disease, or what Mana had wasn't contagious? Either explanation works for me! I look forward to the epilogue, because I'm wondering if you're going to include Machika or go a different route with it. Please keep up the great work and update soon!
general zargon chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
Okay, that was purposefully vague. Nya! :P I have a feeling I was right about Mana having the plague, wasn't I? And for some reason, I have the mental image of Rain with braided hair in my mind...any chance of you working that into an epilogue or something? In honor of my epicness? . LOL! Oh, and here you go! *Hands 101 a bag of virtual potato chips* Enjoy! XP Anyway, please keep up the great work and update soon!
general zargon chapter 4 . 6/19/2012
Yes, I know I'm awesome, but thank you for saying so! :D Well that explains things a little bit. Poor Mana's got the sickness, doesn't she? *Sniffle* I loved the mental image of Rain tumbling down a hill and landing in a lake, it just seems like something that would actually happen to him. :P LOL! This chapter is better written than the last one, so I hope you keep up the great work and update soon! :)
general zargon chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
LOL, your welcome! Be sure to put ketchup on the corndog! XP This chapter was pretty good, still a little rushed, but definitely an improvement over the first chapter! I really liked this chapter, so please keep up the good work and update soon!
general zargon chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
...*Tosses a corndog to 101* How's that? :P LOL! I'm enjoying this story, even though I think it's a little abrupt. There aren't a lot of details, but I'm hoping you'll get to those as the story moves along and you explain the characters a bit more. Like Rain, I'm also curious as to why Mana won't be claiming her title so please update soon!