Reviews for Pickup Lines
gracegrrl007 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
XD That was hilarious. Cute little stubborn Hokuto. XD Did you come up with those pick-up lines yourself? Because those made me laugh the most.
Tokyorose627 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
LOLZ! XD

That was awesome! Loved all the pick up lines! I loved it so much I even put up my own idol challenge!
DaiSukiAnimeSu chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
AHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA X'DDDDDDD

Pure epicness!

Aaaah this is awesome Great story!
ClassicalCynicism chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
(cries tears of joy) Oh my gosh! I love it! It made me laugh really hard! And it turned out better than anything I could've come up with. You are amazing! I love how much of a stalker Hokuto is and how much of a smartass Yoshida is! The groping scene was absolutely hilarious as was the scene where Hokuto asked if he could stick his hands down Yoshida's pants. You expressed Hokuto's thoughts so well! I felt like I was actually him (which is pretty awkward considering I'm a girl.) Again, absolutely astounding work! I'm so glad you wrote this for me! If you don't mind, can I consider this an early birthday present? It's in two weeks anyway, so... Anyway, this is definitely going in my favorites!

Hoping to read more of your work,

Music
Cronomon chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
That was super cute! And funny. I love all the lame pickup lines Hokuto tried, and for the majority of them Yoshida was just like "wtf?". The format of the story was cool! And you included the other Jupiter members, which is instant win. Nice job as always